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Old 10-10-06, 04:17 PM   #1
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RIP Lauren. Will rtf.
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I wanted to do this, wanted to let my feelings out ya know.

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WILL RTF.

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Old 10-10-06, 04:47 PM   #2
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Old 10-10-06, 06:42 PM   #3
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Yo i got yo feed 2moro yo, im bout 2 head to tha game...but i got it..1
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Old 10-10-06, 06:56 PM   #4
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listnin.........beat was weird for this track.........never expected u to use this beat.......
ya flow was actualy pretty goood....just seemed like u was cramin ya lines together....to many werds but ya lyrics was straight bro......felt ya werdz on this......coulda upped tha pressence a lil more but for tha most part...it was good so werd to that.............but fer real rip...to ya friend.....also ya quality was ass.....but werd good track!! an we gon hit that collab real soon........
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Old 10-10-06, 10:51 PM   #5
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beat sounds familiar. real familiar.

okay dont trip when i give you this feed. flow is off for this beat. it sounds like you rushed everything when you rap. your flow ends up falling here and there. lyrics i cant comment on because there pretty personal. well its hard for me to hear certain things too. but from what i can hear, it sounds like she meant a lot to you. thats it.
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Old 10-11-06, 06:06 AM   #6
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wow man it's been a year already???...

yo i ain't got access to speakers at the moment but i'll definitely drop feed when i have so i'll let you know whats up yeah...

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Old 10-11-06, 02:17 PM   #7
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aite safe man...yeah it has, and cheers for the feed peopl.
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Old 10-12-06, 03:54 AM   #8
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Awwww...sad man...sorry to hear


Who was lauren, anyway?

Beat is fitting

I can't really understand your lyrics because of your accent...I apologize that I can't give you feed on that aspect

Flow fit the beat

Ok...some lyrics I got toward the end...very personal


This track elicited the right emotions man.

Good job on that


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Old 10-12-06, 06:30 AM   #9
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u freestyled this!...right?

that was a nice one tho..i feel ur pain!..


aww mayne this is really sad!
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Old 10-12-06, 08:57 AM   #10
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na wrote it wuickly...i had 20 mins freehouse to write and record. Thats why the first draft was the last draft.

Appreciate the feed.
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ah alright..that was a nice touching one anyways!


hit my sig 'chevy slut ft j summers'

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Old 10-13-06, 05:37 PM   #12
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Listenin...yeah for A RIP track beat is weird and everything..but i aint gon dog on u...

because fa real fam ive just lost some1 i love 2, and fuck how ya flow etc. is, lyrics heartfelt...sorry..

flow is aight..delivery..u can tell u mean it...

real deep lyrics...


sorry dawg...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...705#post3091705

this my RIP song to my cousin P.R. can u listen please
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Aighht....beats nice,flows too rushed imo....lyrics were nice though imo...delivery was smooth,it was koo...emotion was koo...i'd try work on ya flow,write to the snares....damn im sorry bout it though...RIP....you can tell that you was meaning this

RTF here plz.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235922
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Old 10-20-06, 07:42 AM   #15
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hmmm...

iight hit my sig..thanx
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