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12-05-05, 04:35 PM
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Intermental - Real Artist
IP: 4AB7 117A
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lyrically i feel this track is now my strongest...wanted to see if I did contreversial joints, wud suit me?..what yall thinks..its called "REAL ARTIST"..ill rtf... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2564408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320
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12-05-05, 04:40 PM
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IP: 77F1 CDA7
Aight
beats Dope...i Used This Before I Tihkn..  Lyrics Good Wow At Dleivery...Nearly Got Me On That Here  Word To The Dubs Lol Word To The Hook Upp The Volume A Lil On It Seems A Lil Low :S Verse 2 yeahh Schools Wank Lol Word To The Deep Vocie bit Hook Again Word Upp Volume I Think hmmm outro hook seems less effects on it good shit man keep up Word To Your Delivery
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12-05-05, 04:41 PM
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IP: 4AB7 117A
thanks dawg.................
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12-05-05, 04:42 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Beat is coo... Quality is coo...WOW...What is with your voice..? Sounds like you have a mad lisp compared to the last time I heard you... Anyway...you have elevated alot. Flow is good. Good shit on that. Now what you need to do...is to work on your delivery. You sound like your whipsering on every track...could be me, but it's what I hear. Good track man. Keep it up. |
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12-05-05, 04:44 PM
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IP: 4AB7 117A
thanks dawg..LOL at the lisp...i dunno jus came out like this
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12-06-05, 05:24 AM
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IP: 973F 12DB
upppin......................
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12-06-05, 07:26 AM
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I'ma Royal
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IP: AF58 598D
yea...u r right this is ur best song this far
quality is better than ever i like ur lyrics,and flow is very nice hook is kl ur voice was kl im really feeling this track...keep ur shit up..nah mean
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12-06-05, 07:41 AM
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IP: DA99 D2C5
thanks alot dawg........
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12-07-05, 12:04 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 3818 6AC0
lyrics i was feeling the firs verse better
i like ur dubs they sound really nice good track i think ur voice changed a little on this emotion im feelin it fit the track really good upp the chorus a little bit kinda hard to hear
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12-07-05, 06:13 PM
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IP: BF98 1AFB
thanks...........
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12-07-05, 07:14 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
very interstin delivery with the lyrics...good...
good vocab early on ur flow needs to be tightened though...it's the weakest part of your game, IMO the lyrics were good flow was NOT BAD, but inconsistent and shakey Chorus needs to be AMped sounds pretty cool tho did u lower ur voice on ur hook? hmmmm... not a bad track dawg...jus elevate ur flow 1 |
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12-07-05, 08:10 PM
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IP: EB37 FE1E
Why does your Usertitle say Soul Rebel?
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12-08-05, 03:39 PM
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IP: 7835 F887
^^^^cos thats the name for my mixtape......
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12-09-05, 01:37 PM
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IP: 7D90 C302
i havent heard much from ya but this is a quality drop feelin this beat flow is real solid everybody got something to fix on they shit feel me .....lil shakey at times but fuck we we strivin stay up tho rtf ..........holla when ya drom another playa
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12-10-05, 10:11 AM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: A6CC 8109
<--has this beat...flow is nice..voice is good..need more emotion...lyrics is ok...quality is ok....2nd..same as b4..lyrics still nice....jus work on emotion...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216565 RTF plz 1ne
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