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09-19-04, 11:26 AM
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new stuff right chia!
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I spit fire like a volcanoe spewin/
Reviewin the constitution for further confusion/ Clearence in apperance the fear is in slugs/ Flyin like bugs to tug at ya thugs/ Leavin them gaspin hardly breathin and askin/ "Am I gonna die?" dawg I am so old fashion/ I eat bones of emcee's like tic-tacs and rations/ Blastin my lyrical rapid-fire my raps is hire your raps desire/ A listener to like or review whats truth/ Becuz 95% of ya rhymes is planes lies/ And the other 5 is whats dreamed and designed/ Cant deny whats trully inevidable/ My raps plus voice are nuttin short of incredible/ (kinda short, jus felt like doin an OPENMIC) uppin^^^^
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09-19-04, 11:50 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
^^^^^^uppin Yallllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^^^^^^
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ILL Philosophy:::: Myth MC Prephickz Mistah_Tate "Wif him I feel no more pain/ Like I been baptized in novacain/" ------Genisis |
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09-19-04, 11:50 AM
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IP: EC0C A279
nice drop nigga, vocab was on point, i liked the flow too overall nice shit
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09-19-04, 11:51 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
thnx my nigga, we gotta get some of dem sigs lol
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ILL Philosophy:::: Myth MC Prephickz Mistah_Tate "Wif him I feel no more pain/ Like I been baptized in novacain/" ------Genisis |
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09-19-04, 12:32 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was an okay drop... could have been alot better... your vocab was iight i guess. but your multies were weak ... structure was okay... but i advice you dont /// use those lines to end you lines... naa'mean...overall keep it up and you'll do fine
pz.
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09-19-04, 12:35 PM
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP: CC30 7562
That Was A Aight Drop Dawg Your Vocab Was Aight And Structure Was Aight But The Lines Gotta Be The Same Length No Multi's at all Dont Use /// At The End Use ... Those Aight But oVERALL Some OF The Punches In There Hit Hard
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