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05-31-04, 12:21 AM | #1 | |
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Blak Siinz VS .:VA:. topical
IP: 75D5 EF9C
unlimited lines just dont make it a book
house rules spit within 2 hours after check in topic creeping shadows
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05-31-04, 12:23 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 75D5 EF9C
check i will have my shit within the hour...pc
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05-31-04, 12:26 AM | #3 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
check
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05-31-04, 12:34 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 75D5 EF9C
check............................................. ..
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05-31-04, 01:05 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 75D5 EF9C
iight here is my verse....a lil fucked but oh well
Darkness falls and the moon is full, we know that tonight’s the night. Motherfuckers fucked with us its time to make things right. Clock strikes Ten time to meet up at the spot where I told them to be. 4 loyalist brothers at my back, Shocker, Bugsey, Ty, and Biggie. Assortment of lethal Weapons laid out in front of us Time to pick and choose. Everyone knows what is there’s and what is there brothers, no one ever argues. Pass around the vodka and sit talk about old times cause tonight might be our last. Look around at each member and remember that they always stood by me in the past. Finish the bottle, lock and load and we got a different mind set were out to kill. I walk out into the street and listen to the noises of the night, dogs howling, glass breaking, car engines, all this as I standstill. We walking slowly weary of our surroundings nothing to fear except for what lurks behind the creeping shadow. This is could be our life, “Darkness brings death upon us” they don’t care as if I was Jesus and they were my disciples I walk and they follow. Were Behind enemy lines our lives are at risk we got to stick to the shadows and be quiet as if we were under a spell. rely on our stealth use tactics from video games Metal gear solid and Splinter Cell. Spot the enemy 15 at the most, backs turned unaware of our presence so we got time to aim. “Who to shoot, who to kill,” which one killed my brother, Hmmm, Fuck that their all the same. “Bang Bang” Gunfire all around me unconscious of what I was shooting just wanting them dead. I take a look around and see Shocker lying on the ground with his Cross in his hand praying for forgiveness as his life spilled from his head. Then I realized that this is my life this is the game that we all played, either you win or you die. Even when you win you lose some of your closes and all you can do is breakdown and cry. 10 of them dead, 5 left I’m firing at them when I feel a hot pain in my liver. I fall to the floor and put my hand to my wound, Scream my lungs out as the blood flows out of me like a river. My visions blurry can’t breathe, I’m wheezing try to feel for indicator of life but I cant feel my heartbeat. This is it died in the darkness of the Shadows Will’Con left dead in a dark alley on 54th Street.
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05-31-04, 02:10 AM | #6 | |
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IP: 75D5 EF9C
hurry up wit your verse you got like 16 minutes left man
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05-31-04, 11:19 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 49AD 2361
he did a no show??
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05-31-04, 04:22 PM | #8 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
nah im here.... check- my dad wus rushed to the hospitol, cuz his pace maker had somthin wrong with it
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05-31-04, 04:29 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
iight then hurry up and spit man
you had more then 10 extra hours
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05-31-04, 05:06 PM | #10 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
.:your shadow creeps endlessly:.
every one of us can testify that they have been watched from a distance... ...although i am mortal with fear, i can stand relentless to the truth in this sentence. i dont pretend to claim the knowledge of life's secrets, but i honor those who try... ...dark places dont comply with my reputation, i dont greave, weap, tear or cry. light and dark, day and night are just a few of those aspects among the complex... ...adhear to the verbs that roll of my tunge,"human knowledge of life never connects". therefore, we will never understand such intellect within this life span... ...when darkness hits, torches and lamps cannot overtake, but mass light can. -for in the shadows mixed with shine, appears a follower who creeps behind... -he comes in solid he comes in blur, he has no pathogen he has no cure... -you spot him simply he wont abide,you turn to escape but hes on the other side... -hell appear in day light and in night, he guides himself with your own sight... -you control him but you fear his figure, the more you retreat he grows twice bigger... -you add more light to hinder his health, but that just makes him duplicate himself... your inner thought is now at rest,what you already have known is what your seeking... ...because you came to realize, it is you very own shadow that is creeping.
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06-01-04, 08:47 AM | #11 | |
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IP: B6DF 2706
Blak Siinz you get this shit b/c .:VA:. 's shit was wack as hell. No nice lines, nice structure but youe imagination was not kickin in. I like thst you tried to battle topical, but topical it not 4 everyone.Blak Siinz nice structure, your shit was kind of long but your imaginnation was flowing in this joint. Return the fava:lyricalmethod vs. $ik
vote=Blak Siinz
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06-02-04, 10:53 AM | #12 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 1EE0 12EB
Vote: VA
Blak siinz writes nursery rhymes that don't paint a picture Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
06-02-04, 09:26 PM | #13 | |
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 3C80 F381
winner goes 2 black i liked his better he stayed on topic and really held the trophy on dis 1 nice
bestline-Darkness falls and the moon is full, we know that tonight’s the night. Motherfuckers fucked with us its time to make things right. descentcy worsteline-nuttin juss stretched at timez va-also nice but didnt match black bestline-every one of us can testify that they have been watched from a distance... ...although i am mortal with fear, i can stand relentless to the truth in this sentence. nice worsteline-none u also stretched alot winner-black
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06-02-04, 10:01 PM | #14 | |
Suspended: Cheating
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IP: 7C15 C1EB
ayo black, you gotz my vote, i wasnt feeln va's shit at all, so return the favor. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734
Arite thx all, peace./ |
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06-06-04, 12:19 AM | #15 |
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IP: 3240 794D
Ainmo - okay...you didnt have much of a flow...stretched lines...didnt really have the topic of creeping shadows....u had a lil bit of the concpept but wasnt really about it...so that really downgraded ur whole thing....need to work on ur wordplay to no have stretched lines...so elevate and keep battlin....
Blak Siinz - nice drop...u at least used the topic and stayed on topic...so u easily won...but good flow....and a lil creative with ur style switches...good vocab and wordplay....keep elevatin and stay dope... Vote - Blak Siinz Return the favor wit an honest vote.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128291
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