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Old 06-18-06, 07:54 PM   #1
Past Tense
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Exclamation *this Is My Life*-*real On Real 2006*

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4081857

New Song "THIS IS MY LIFE" going on the new Real on Real mixtape

This is the real right here..........

Seriously

Newest Song by Past Tense

YOU AINT HEARD FROM ME IN SECOND

IF YOU LEAVE FEED I WILL DO THE SAME


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Old 06-18-06, 08:06 PM   #2
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production is good.....ha some of the lyrics were so so, but its pretty deep....dilever is good falls off near the middle end of the first verse....and middle of the second verse....its not a bad song, buttttt could be better.....and im pretty sure you know that....
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Old 06-18-06, 08:11 PM   #3
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yeah i feel you..but thats what i was aimin for......

I like this song a lot..but thanks for the feed
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Old 06-18-06, 09:21 PM   #4
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nah nothing against the song its good...i just think you coulda done better judging on your skill level and your ablilities
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dad said, son you're fucking high
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so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-18-06, 09:25 PM   #5
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yeah.......i kinda rushed it in a way

but yeah..if you got somthin for me too leave feed on himme up
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Old 06-18-06, 10:18 PM   #6
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soon enough....ima post some things later
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-18-06, 10:25 PM   #7
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real talk on the track. Beat is ok, snap music? wtf on a track like this...chill. Anyway good drop fam
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Old 06-19-06, 07:02 PM   #8
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Mad props on this one man, I loved the vibe you gave. Very good beat choice mixed with a good lyrical content. The hook was very very catchy and it got me into the song a lot. You did a pretty good job with the delivery and you kept up with a solid drop throughout the verses. overall I think this is ill, a drop to bump.
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Old 06-19-06, 09:03 PM   #9
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yo if you still wanted to return the feed heres the link

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230267

thanks
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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