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04-22-05, 05:57 PM | #1 | |||||
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Oh No - CJAK
IP: F519 0F67
This is my client CJAK i want to start bringin his songsonhere soi can get some feedback thanks yall
www.soundclick.com/CJAK
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04-22-05, 05:58 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: F519 0F67
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2103602
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2103583
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04-22-05, 11:11 PM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Okay typing as I listen...sampled intro is good.....awww either the dubs or the adldibs are too loud cuz alot of the lines I can't decipher.....from what I can hear..the lyrics are real real real basic.....even the rhymes are real real real real basic....1 syllable rhymes.....no change ups in rhyme scheme...his delivery is too laidback...an the track gets boring after first verse.....the way he played off the "oh no" sample was wack...he shoulda had a punch there, he should had a punch somewhere in his track period...he was bragging wit real basic lines..if u gon brag u gotta proove why u the illest an he didn't prove anything here other than he can rhyme basic words....quality was good aside from the libs or dubs being too loud in beginning...this was a subpar track though....I wasn't feeling it personally but keep dropping son..no hate jus realness..........1
RTF son: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187385
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