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OutCome | 0 | 0% | |
Dev | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-06-04, 04:39 AM | #1 | |
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Dev vs OutCome
IP: 07E0 A9F2
you spit first, i'll follow
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02-06-04, 05:06 AM | #2 | |
Rare One
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IP: 283B 08F8
this a check in.. Why dont you just blind spit.. Im ready....Are you?
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02-06-04, 05:17 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
im ready, drop yours then ill follow straigth after.....
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02-06-04, 05:25 AM | #4 | |
Rare One
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IP: 283B 08F8
Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh
now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down... Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation? Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs wicky whooooooa
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02-06-04, 05:26 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet! And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat! So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak! And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing! OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had! |
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02-06-04, 05:27 AM | #6 | |
Rare One
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IP: 283B 08F8
lol fuck... i should have read over the basterd, lmao
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02-06-04, 05:40 AM | #7 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh
now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down... Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation? First line is good, second is mad played Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag played and whack Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty I swear of heard the 1st line before....Bit? Nah I'll trust you but its played already I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around ok What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs ehh played, but ok wicky whooooooa So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet! hmmm ok I suppose And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat! ok So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak! lol..hehe kinda played but I laughed And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing! nice OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had! played I think Dev pulled this one out. He was more creative in his punches. Out some of ya lines were stretched and lose the bold dawg. ALso try and be more creative and original with your punches/personals/metas. Dev you had some ok personals and punches. Good battle guys. Please hit these links up or jus one lol http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459 v. freeza in frontlines http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 v. lilbreeze in frontlines http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157 v. $pit in elevated |
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02-06-04, 08:02 AM | #8 |
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Dev vs. Outcome
IP: A965 0752
Outcome:
Era.. eh eh eh era eh era eh era.... eh eh eh now.. ahem... sit Judges sit down... Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation? Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs wicky whooooooa Flow- Had good flow and structure Personals/Punches- Some good personals and punches.A Few punches were a little played though. Vocab- decent vocab, it gets the job done. Creativity- I liked the creativity with the personals ( hemispherses, wits-end). The masterbation punch was played out as well as the pre-writs line, but they were worded well so it worked. Dev: So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet! And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat! So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak! And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing! OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had! Flow- Also had good flow and structure Personals/Punches- I liked personal about the 'seed', but I thought that the first line was a little played. Some good punches here, especially liked the 6 & 7th line and and the closer. Vocab- Decent, but again it flows good so it works Creativity- Pretty good, some nice personals and punches,a few lines a little played but still a good job I felt that this was a pretty close battle. Both showed good flow and structure as well as some creativity. While there some good personals and punches, I just felt that Dev's hit harder.I cant officially vote( not enough post) but I would give my vote to: Dev Vote on these fukn' battles! apathy vs. gravity apathy vs. jamie |
02-06-04, 08:09 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 6F9E F23B
I think Dev won this batle because of his better flow and structure,
And his punches are well better than da other guy outcomes.... Hit my battle up in my sig.... The topical battle in it...... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
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02-06-04, 09:54 AM | #10 | |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
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02-06-04, 11:07 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
aiight not a bad battle but i thought DEV took this 1 because his punches hit harder and his flow was smooth...................
OutCome ur verse was aiight but ur flow was Patchy.............. V/DEV |
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02-06-04, 11:08 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Can u hit this up because i took the time to read urs............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112376 thnx................. |
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02-06-04, 11:33 AM | #13 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 8798 FA7E
Yo a serious vote now
flow: Dev had sum gud rhymes in there and better wordplay than Outcome cu i felt that Outcome was forcing to much and because of that his flow didn't feel gud punchlinesFev had more sick punches and they came harder; Outcome you have to work on your punches and personals cuz I didn't saw any gud punches or personals structure: both had a gud structure goin on Originality: Dev has sum lines goin that were origanal lets say more original than Outcom Outcome you need to elevate VOTE DEV plz vote on this thx www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593
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02-06-04, 07:07 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thnx, the ones that READ rules on voting...lol....upp[2]
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02-06-04, 07:17 PM | #15 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
flow-overall flow goes to Dev,lines were kept shorter, not so stretched. outcome, your flow wasn't bad either but your lines were a little long in spots
punches-i think dev had these as well, more creative at least, outcome has good punches as well but some are kinda played vocab-tie personals-outcome took the personals with the england line, the wits end line, all were good. dev had okay personals, not really very many except for name play creativity-this was a tie, both came with some fairly creative verses in this battle overall-Dev please return the favor and drop honest votes on the links in my sig
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