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MiSk | 0 | 0% | |
AutoMatik | 5 | 100.00% | |
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04-30-05, 04:29 PM | #1 | |
Banned: Biting
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AutoMatik vs MiSk
IP: 9CB2 0FC1
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10-Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-30-05 at 10:19 PM Must drop verse in 350 minutes after check in. |
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04-30-05, 04:30 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 04:30 PM.
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04-30-05, 04:33 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 6645 381F
MiSk has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 04:33 PM.
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04-30-05, 04:48 PM | #4 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
you rookie haven't done enough laps around the track...
ya havent had 1 hot battle, ya know your texts are "wack" i take a second to speak, i keep my A-U-T Omatic "in reach" i ain't talkin romance, but you'll get swept off ya "feet" you have no escape, from this mass mind rape play this again and then "Be Kind and Rewind" the tape your rhymes arent "dope", they wont give you a "hit" try smoking from the wrong end of a broken cigarette when you "drop", yah gonna think its tha bomb it'll have everyone laughing, like a kid playin "DonkeyKong"
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There's a lot of talk about whos the hottest, to be honest
hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us! |
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04-30-05, 05:11 PM | #5 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
Ima BEAT UP THIS NOOB AND EAT HIM TA DEATH..'took-his-brain'..I dont NEED YA DAMN RESPECT……
dont he SEE IM THE BEST..?!?, I FEED EM A CHECK..ya.messin wit a LEADING MAN IN TEXT……. Hes WEAK IN THE CHEST AND CHEEKS ARE A MESS.. plus ya punches 'Never-land' like if PETER PAN WAS DEAF……. judging by your sig..I think its time that you PART-WITH-YOUR-BROKEN-CREW….. hardly-am-I-joking-dude..this is misk’s 'accupuncture session' cause Im just STARTING-TO-POKE-AT-YOU……. come on...look at ya avy..?? Its OBVIOUS this PESSANT ISNT HARD….. like 50 cent in tephlons siggy u look like u just gave 'head' to some un PLEASENT PRISON GUARDS…… your the example of a SEL(shell)FISH RAPPER Im the type they name ELVIS AFTER…… I SMELL DISASTER leave misk ridin a 'cart' like an 'elder' with a PELVIS FRACTURE……. |
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04-30-05, 05:14 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
uppin this for votes..............................
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04-30-05, 05:14 PM | #7 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
nice drop...good luck...didnt have time to sit and write... had to drop mine real quick
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04-30-05, 05:15 PM | #8 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
uppin for votes......................................
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04-30-05, 05:29 PM | #9 |
...fuck life.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: AutoMatik
automatik gets this though both verses were close...i wasnt really feeling this battle and felt both of yall could have upped your verses a lil more... automatik-good:you had gtood multies throughout, also nice werdplay, punches and personals bad:your structure was off, and i wasnt feeling your opener misk-good:also nice punches and werdplay, good structure, bad:wasnt feeling the opener or closer, you also coodve had some multies overall: opener-m closer-a multies-a punches-tie werdplay-tie flow-tie personals-a v/automatik |
04-30-05, 05:31 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
^thanks uppin for more votes......................
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04-30-05, 05:40 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: AutoMatik
took this one with his multies. tHIS WASnt the hottest verse, But I can see you got some potential to be dope. Yo structure wasnt all that great either, but yo verse flowed well. misk, I couldnt give you this vote becuase yo punches werent making any sense. They just seemed unfinished, and spit because they rhymed. I think you have a lot more elevating to do than automatik. automatik gets my vote with a all around better verse, and harder multies. other categories are irrelevant to vote under in this battle. automatik...you got skilz...check out my crrew Livin' Legendz. I would put u on tha elevation roster, but you should be off soon, becuase I can see you got potential. Just post somewhere in there saying that you want in...and I'll get you down...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187032 good battle....check us out ~1~ |
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04-30-05, 05:43 PM | #12 |
Home Of Philly
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IP: 7785 08A2
Voted For: AutoMatik
yo on da real ya strukture was terrible it made ya verse seem wakk as shit yo fix dat u had betta punches n dis verse openor-automatik he had a aight punch n dat openor punches-automatik betta punches overall personals-misk he had betta personals metas-none multies-automatik strukture-misk wordplay-none closer-automatik aight yo automatik took dis he had betta punches he put more effort n 2 hiz verse u gotta fix ya strukture ya shit lookz wakk as hell on da real fix ya strukture n yea cum a lil harder next battle v-automatik |
04-30-05, 05:49 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9CB2 0FC1
uppiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes.....................
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04-30-05, 07:04 PM | #14 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
thanks for the tips....
like i said...just starting out.... trying to gain experience |
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04-30-05, 08:41 PM | #15 | |
Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
uppin for votes....................................
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