ayo, i forgot 2 put the dot in ya name that fuicked me up twice.

10-15 lines, no crew/hate/whak votes

u no the rest.

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checkin in, start tha clock........................

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Check. 30 mins..

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miss L, you compell me 2 !break yo ass down!
lyrically RIP you out cha brothel.. dont want !hoes like u around!
pack ya bags, get outta town.. i want chu outta sight..
pimp say ya bad for bidness, you got a voice like 'big syke'
transvestite, "ay look" its 'chick wit a dick' on tha mic
i elevated now, i aint bout 2 loose 'twice 2 a dyke'
you speakin spanish tryin 2 be latino.. but cha 'black'
this bitch's extortin j-lo, like ja-rule did 2 'tupac'
100% whak, for real girl, ya words r a fuken mess
afta i win this battle, i bet she'll blame it on PMS
"oh tha stress" she says, her tampons are too 'stuck up'
this chicks gettin nervous, ran outta credit wit lady luck
your lines is fucked up, they should come with warning signs
"git ready for shitty flows n weak ass punchlines"
iight im out.. peace bitch, ajust ya balls, lets hear ya whak rhymes........
(*adjusts balls n throws mic at lil lyricist*)

if you relly need em, heres sum explenations.......
line 6 - she beat me last time we battled (my first text battle)
4th bar - she keeps speakin spanish, but i seen her pic, she aint latino.
n uhh.. the lady luck thing is cuz her stats is 4-0, pure luck lol (joke)

aiight fo real, holla back wit sum votes peep.....

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no show.......wuts the deal.. D'Q for real man. this shit was sposed 2 be over in 30 minutes, its bin like an hour now.

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Ayo, I'm sorry man! I had my hair done and it took longer than I expected.

The dude could throw a good line if he were Bush and going fishin
He keeps on wastin my time by throwing punches yet keeps on missin
His ammunition consists of pebbles because he ran out of paper clips
I’m gonna bust this rebel and leave him sore with stapled lips
He battled with his reflection and the dumb fuck lost to himself
He gambled with one dollar and he lost his entire wealth
I’ll treat you like my backpack and zip your bitch ass up
You’re so small in comparison, I’ll roll you over with a Tonka trunk
The blood’s cut off from yah dick so stop wearing the tighty whities
You’re speaking complete nonsense, like Baxter on Bruce Almighty
Hope my lessons aren’t in vain cause I’m going through the motions
The only way you’d be slick mayne is if I lathered you with lotion

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ay miss lady bitch! wuts happenin????????

officially 4 hours late, i shud win this shit by default

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I'm soooooo sorry! My sister took forever doing my hair.

And it was about two hours late.

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Strcuture: tie

Flow: tie
Punches: miss
Personals: miss
Votes: Miss

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A crip just like Bonecollector

mis L ..got this easy yo.
ak you got slaughtered son
i think you underestimated her
better luck next time
miss L good flow punches was all money shots..ak had a couple but they didint hold up...

vote.......miss L

return the fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132947
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133225

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BOSTON LYRICIST

no beef,

I think MC AK took this one. Both of U have elivated a lot. Miss just needs to stop using simple jokes. Mc's verse would've probably been a lot better if he battled like he was doing just another nigga in, its fun to spit on a female but sometimes it gets overused and dumb. U both did great in this battle, Usually I dont be feelin Miss's verse but she did good. Mc Ak just so happend to have more complex lines than U this time. Here my summery....

Punches:MC AK
Flow:Mc...but U lost it at the end so I'll give it to Miss.
Metaphores:Mc AK

thats it.
V/MC AK.

vote on one of my battles in return. Honestly

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

ay lethal lunatic dog, u said that lyricist won wit personals, i think u need 2 check that verse again.. none of them rhymes even came close to bein personal.

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MC AK, stop hatin. Give props when props are due.

I liked this line of yours:
afta i win this battle, i bet she'll blame it on PMS

No one's used that against me until now. lol

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alright

miss. good god
this is what im expecting from you
good structure..good flow
punches were ok...good personals
some multi's good meta's


mc aka: your shit was stretched..it looked like a fuckin story
good punches..lacked personals
ok meta's....bad structure...bad flow

vote: miss lyricist

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133197

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