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08-30-05, 04:33 PM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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A lost M.C. (Getting spins all day in the local hip hop store)
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http://www.myspace.com/theunscenecvillians
let me know what you think two reviews i gave are http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2406385 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206697
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08-30-05, 05:39 PM | #2 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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2 different intros?
thats weird, but doesnt take nothin away from the song ya quality is good, but ya vocals are a tad too high. I got like 25-30 seconds into the song and turned it off. I didnt like your style/voice. It may be me, but white people just sound weird rappin. You dont have the voice for it. but ugggh, I couldnt tell you about the track overall. I exited out after you started rappin
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08-30-05, 05:53 PM | #3 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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haha, still mad about the losses i guess...no beef i'm done with this childish stuff....
up up and awayyyyyyy
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08-30-05, 05:59 PM | #4 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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wtf is you talkin about?
nigga the shit was weak as hell.
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08-30-05, 05:59 PM | #5 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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its all good, thanks for the opinion, to each his own.
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08-30-05, 06:25 PM | #6 | ||||
Hell yeah
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lmao at putting it on myspace, can i add you man, i wanted to do it before but thaught u had to be registered but blah anyway, nice voice, quality is soso , canadian mc= dope werd lol, nice beat man, nice chorus too, flow is pretty dope man, emotion is perfect
overall dope track man 8/10 |
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08-30-05, 06:39 PM | #7 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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yes yes, all of that is good, the emotion is good, you dont sound like a robot and you're rappin on beat, but I just dont like your style/voice
I dont like Tupa's rhyme scheme I dont like Memphid bleek, period I dont like Talib Kweli's voice/style I dont like Common's emotion/voice
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08-30-05, 06:55 PM | #8 | ||||
Champion
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likin the intro......likin the jodeci sample....likin the flow....but not likin that i can hear ure voice in the left ear and the beat in right ear lol but dnt matta....likin the lyrics...flow is dope...not fell off once...likin the chorus sped up...and im lovin that jodeci song...its my fav song by them.....but it kinda does not fit the issue but the flow is dope in 2nd verse..lyrics are dope...lovin the bit when it says when table turns....likin this track hit me up for a collab...lovin the hook
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08-30-05, 08:59 PM | #9 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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lovin the intro lol.. oh shizzle? another one? lol.. the beat is good.. lol wth? its only playing on left side lol.. i mean i can only hear ur voice in left side.. but yeah.. lyrics is pretty good.. flow is good... should show more emotion.. but you need to lean some some skillz with making your presence on mic stand out better.. you should try dubbing your voice on the parts that rhyme to make it sound better.. and also should up your delivery.. your delivery is okay.. but you could do better.. but this track would be better if you show more emotion. so work on that.. but lyrics is okay.. but yeah this is still okay.. 7/10 oh n i added u
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08-30-05, 09:30 PM | #10 | ||||
L.E
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Damn man...likin this track...
One question...do you fade your voice to the left by chance..? I noticed that in our Rain Drops track...Maybe it's just my speakers...But anyway...Quality is decent...emotion is good...flow is great...I like your lyrics too man...keep it up man |
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08-31-05, 08:43 AM | #11 | |||||||
tha illest
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u got a good voice man, i like ya presence, lyrics are aight, but like u make sounds forced like happy-nuss... i dunno that i wasnt feelin, but u really remind me of ill chris , sumtimes u kinda slow down n pause, u did this all in one take? thats what it kinda sounds like, 2nd verse, sounds like ya vocals are only comin outta the left speaker lol... sumn about the sound that makes the quality kinda iffy, but like i said, ya voice is ill, keep elevating man, u'll get there, i like this
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08-31-05, 05:50 PM | #12 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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thanks all...uppin...hit me up, i'll always return this
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