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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220061
limited^^
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219937
preminition^^^^

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first cat:

quals aight

flows aight

meh...i aint gonna bother it was aight

non aka(TRACKK STARR)Get your damn name -_-

Lyrics koo

Flows koo

Foo!you gettin dope for hardly any time on a mic

Deliverys koo

emotions koo


HOOK OWNS!!!!


LMMFAO@OUTRO

TRAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKSTTTTARRRRR PRODUCTIONS IN YOUR WEIRD STEVEN HAWKING VOICE HAHAHHAHAAH

LOOOL

Overall:7/10

Keepp daa fuckkk up!!!!!!!!!

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OYD MAFIA

drop tyhe links to ur feed if u would

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First mcee the quality is really bad needs a lot of work....the flow is really bad imo needs a lot of work riding the beat and smoothing out his delivery....he's very monotone...lyrics are are eh ok....second mc why does the beat skip when you come in? you can tell the difference between quality....second mcee's flow is ok just after hearing twista rip it it sounds weird to hear a slow flow on this...lyrics are ok not really feeling it. ok track

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the 1st guy's flow was kinda choppy, wasn't very fluid in spots, the beat was lack luster, coulda been alot hotter... the beat definitely skips before the second guy comes in flow was more grounded, voice was cool, lyrically wasn't that blazin'... it was ok

Feed used 1/20/06 "What's Wrong With Hip~Hop?"

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yea its how i edited it cause he cut off tha beat wasnt sure how to fix it im fairly new at this,....a month or two............................
so yeah my quality>his but i didn t know how to edit it sorry but enjoi tha track as it is sorry

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ya flow aint too bad for just beginning..and once u get ur stuff i'm sure youll get better..if you need someone too mix ur vocals give me them and then send me the beat ur using..and i'll do it...but u need too work....on ur lyrics and ya need too improve....ur well better then the first dude tho

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ADD ME LETS MAKE SOMETHING

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wassup with the sound quality?

sounds like the whole track is playing through a filter...it's very muffled and muted


1st cat has potential with the flow...U need to up ur delivery though...sounds like ur reading

some pops in the track

wassup with the track getting louder midway?

aye yae yae


2nd cat has a good delivery

flow is simplistic on this track...not bad though

lyrics are bland on both parts, IMO


decent track


1

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220133

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OYD MAFIA

1st dude....quality is bad but..flow is good,u got a decent voice for this..cant realy make out much of the lyrics..damn...quality jus uppppp'ddddd second mc delevery is real nice,voice is...fimiliar.....flow is on but like..idk not realy my style i guess...lyrics is ok n shit,the "like wow" line was kinda lame...chorus could use some work man..beat is pimp...overall was a decent track tho man for real

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

you need a second feed link by the time i get on tommorow or this will be closed you dropped a link to prems sc lol
if this is closed when you see this pm me the link or post it in the stickied thread at the top of the forum

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