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Old 01-23-04, 10:25 AM   #1
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Remix to the Eminem produced "Runnin'" - Barz and Lumee (Drop links 2)

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Give some good feedback please...this is my first track in like 4 months...I've been on a long break...

Barz = Verse 1 & Hook
Me = Verse 2

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/sessmusic.htm - "Runnin' Remix"

Thanks all!
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Old 01-23-04, 11:49 AM   #2
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cant hear it yet but i think i know how ur verse goes lol
but if u were really smart u would leave this web site .. Cause it GAY .. ur gonna get like no replies cause every one here is a text emcee .. and there gay!
but i will listen later
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Old 01-23-04, 01:52 PM   #3
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think you know how my verse goes?

Just fuckin reply...don't waste time.
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Old 01-23-04, 06:46 PM   #4
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Old 01-24-04, 08:36 AM   #5
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Old 01-24-04, 10:35 AM   #6
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Real nice song you got there... Both verses had good flow and good delivery... Feelin tha second verse more tho

- 1d
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Old 01-24-04, 11:23 AM   #7
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Ill deliver, nice lyrics, the first verse was hot...
Not really feelin the chorus...
Second dude is ill too, nice lyrics, he fell off a lil at the end...
Overall it was a pretty decent song...
Keep up the good work...

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Old 01-25-04, 02:44 PM   #8
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Thx...uppin!
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Old 01-25-04, 03:04 PM   #9
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listenin.. flow was there.. voice is ok.. delivery was on point.. lyrics are good, but a lil to thuggish.. u have a lil too much reverb on the verses.. hook is good, cause this beat is hard to do a good hook.. 2nd cat, was good... flow was tight.. voice is ok.. delivery was koo.. overall nice track..
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