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04-07-04, 12:39 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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(just cause i forgot) Adebisi vs. dirtboy69
IP: 275E DC37
4 bar min.
16 bar max. verses due by friday night(cause it started late) no check in just post your verse voting rules same as in the rest of the league, no dick riding, bull shit votes, votes must be explained. good luck i'll have my verse by tomorrow morning
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-07-04, 02:42 PM | #2 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
I'm raw, shit, just watch me blaze dude
You changed your title? Shit you shoulda changed ya name too! Its a bitch move, leaving my out.... Especially since you need me, Quo, and Baron To give this league an ounce of clout Take this bout with ease, I cant help it G I mean who loses... ...To the kid who tried to hype a text LP And for the last time, I'll explain this, dumb shit This was not 4 bars!!!! It was 4 fucking couplets |
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04-07-04, 09:03 PM | #3 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
i'm sorry for my poor spelling just put up with it
adebisi your volcab's so basic and your flow's like my audio// i may have lost 15 times but shit i'll still beat you when we go// your gettin crushed like caught between two transports speeding// when crossing the street in the middle of a busy intersection// couplet?? damn this fagot's reading just too much poetry// given a book of it by your boyfriend fag it's plain to see// that this kid's been in more asses then a gay proctoligist// no punches open fists your smacking with those limp wrists// none of your shit's hurtin like i was paralized below the neck// could let you have a team still your punches won't have effect// cause every single one of your lines are played out and weak// like william hung you suck and you must be some sort of geek// mah let the voting begin
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-08-04, 08:14 PM | #4 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
votes???? this does count in the standings
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-09-04, 07:59 AM | #5 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 0F7A 2931
I gotta go wit DirtBoy on this one........... His shit flowed better and punches were there, personals too. It didn't seem like Adebisi even tried. I expected a long ass angry verse since he was bitchin so much about lettin him in this week and all I got was ^^^ that?
Vote: DirtBoy69
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04-09-04, 08:07 AM | #6 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
uppin over the no shows
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-09-04, 08:37 AM | #7 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: A32E 95CA
Aight Check Dis..
Adebisi: 6/10 Even Though Short, Your Punches Were Felt. You Got The Point Across With Little Lines. Flow Was Aight, But No Mulits and Metaphors In There. Style Is Kinda Wack. Dirtboy69: 6.5/10 Your Flow Was Offf, Sum Of Your Lines Didn't Even Ryhme. Um..Word Usuage Would Be Nice. But You Won This Becasue Of Your Effort and The Punches You Threw. I Like Stretched Lines...Not Short As Shit Lines. It's Text and I Wanna Read!!! Vote - Dirtboy69 ~R~ |
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04-09-04, 08:52 AM | #8 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: 6DCA 81D9
And yet again relaunched voters dont know how to read
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04-10-04, 05:25 AM | #9 | |||||||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: EED2 4F8F
Adebisi .....punches were ok but your basic vocab lost dis battle for you dawg...overall....4/10
Dirty....your lines were more complex and punches were nice...0verall...7/10 v/dirty
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04-10-04, 02:48 PM | #10 | ||||
Spiritual Respiration
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo No offense dirt, I know you started all this an everything, but there are a lot of people in this league who can take you wit a flow like that. I'd hate to admit it but adebisi was even worse. at least Dirt Boy had a few complex lines and good vocab. he couldnt spell the words but he still used them good. The only thing you need to work on is ya flow dirt. Adebisi needs to work on everything.
V= Dirty BOy
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Fuck the Record... Co-Topical leader on the Phase 1 All-Star team. Member of Udestructable Emcees (Original) Member of P.S.A (Original) Member of Trap Lyrics Member of Blueprint First ever KO to Spul K.L.L. week 3 battle of the week (vs Restricted) ...The above Proves i'm Fukin Dope Non-Phixional Con.Tentz
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04-12-04, 07:59 AM | #11 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
dirtboy wins 4-0
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