checkin in .................................................. ..................

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Man You aint even check in You need to check your Rhymes
and Ill Give you the test corrections So You can check Your Lines
this aint no Test Through Time..Im Jus Vexin The Lucky
so if you think You can play With me....Im Jus another chucky
Ill make So I Make sure your body reach the skies
and On Your funneral day no one Will See Euthan Ize
You Want To Try me man i'll Blow out Your chest
And You;ll Be Like Juelz Santanna.....Human Crack In The Flesh!
Im Comin Faster Than Sex I Just Thought You Should know
So When You Spit im Disapointed Bcuz You wouldnt Swallow
And When Its Over and Done This Is what You'll read in The Mag
Euthanize No Showed.....The Best Verse The Nigga ever Had !!

-PEace_

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I didnt know if I shoulda droppped or not But There you go didnt try bcuz I dont think he's gonna show

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talk shit about me? im'a show 'em
a fucked up Stanza like I wrote a bad poem.
have ya mouf foamin', that's how I do it big
leave ya whole grill to tha left - like the character in ya sig.
I don't mean to be a jerk, slow down - u excessive talker
.. cuz i'll have Stan drivin' off bridges, like Eminem's stalker.
my record might be ugly - but it's okay dude
don't act like u good
when half these heads ain't even heard of you.
u kno I fucked ya moms, so that means i'm ya pops too
it'd be cool if u call me dad. but Thats Mr. Davis too you.
u think u can fuck wit me? nope. not this day 'n age
my spitz fuck ya vision^ like mine,
after I clicked tha link to ya myspace page.


eww.

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talk shit about me? im'a show 'em
a fucked up Stanza like I wrote a bad poem.
I don't mean to be a jerk, slow down - u excessive talker
.. cuz i'll have Stan drivin' off bridges, like Eminem's stalker.

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You Want To Try me man i'll Blow out Your chest
And You;ll Be Like Juelz Santanna.....Human Crack In The Flesh!

Euth got this here, Stanza, it's great you show up for the league every week on time, you are a good member of the league. You just haven't really learned to deveolop punchlines yet, even that quotable was shaky. Your stuff is just too indirect and doesn't have that wit element to it. Keep readin' more verses from the great ones and you'll improve. Euth, not a great verse, but better, the Stan line was pretty cool, Stanza nameplay was obvious but it hit, rest was aight i guess, you got this.

Vote - Euthanize

Up over no-shows.

Ill make So I Make sure your body reach the skies
and On Your funneral day no one Will See Euthan Ize
And When Its Over and Done This Is what You'll read in The Mag
Euthanize No Showed.....The Best Verse The Nigga ever Had

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I don't mean to be a jerk, slow down - u excessive talker
.. cuz i'll have Stan drivin' off bridges, like Eminem's stalker.


wow...this was weak man....now this is wats going on here. Stanza has problem wording and making up complex or witty or even normal punches. In this battle he had too that weren't hot but still quotables. They just needed to be reworded. You need to get into your shit and stop dropping played shit like no show punches and shit.
Euth...although his writing was better he came too basic from the very beginning. I only saw one quotable in your verse and it was also poorly written fam. Your verse was just not up to what we all know you could do man. Dont ever take it easy on some one just coz you think they wont win dawg.

v/Stanza

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Ok Thanx Yall aye Im not postin no links but my vote will be in everyones open battle

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uppin for more votes please

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