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Old 07-02-02, 01:15 AM   #1
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Week 4: Topical open mic winner

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The top 3 this week were Camarac DJX and Whited_out and this week winner is

Whited_out

There goes the beeper, Im gona take da batteries out dis shit//
every time I sit quick, it beeps, shits ballistic//
but if I miss it, im in shit, it'll prolly be a fast one//
prolly have to do some stitches or maybe put a cast on//
{Dr. White please report immediately to Surgery}//
Whats da problem are ya hurt...how many fingers...point to where its hurtin please//
{Its a gun shot in the head, bullets lodged in da cerebrum//
aight we cant leave him, lets do it, get my tools nurse I'll need them//
This isnt serious...its routine..hell be home in an hour eating//
hook up an I.V. and A heart monitor..keep an eye on his breathing//
Scalpal...jus a little bit further...oh shit I hit a nerve//
cal emerge....{heart rates down a third}, he wont even say a word//
i missed the surgical incision..put him in a vertical position//
I have a ciritcal decison...it may hurt him or may fix em//
{Dr please decide quick, hes losin it, follow ur instinct}//
I think I can dislodge the bullet without too much blood dripping//
get a drip cup, catch the blood, put his wrists up, and grab a sponge//
I have no choice I have to plunge my fingers and grab it wit my thumb//
{Dr. we havent tested his blood, there may be diseases r ya sure}//
this kid needs it, I can help him..and so help me jesus im the cure//
almost, there it is I can feel it, alright I got it//
take it and wash it, and clot the blood too stop it//
{hes steadying}, the medication, turn down the prozzak, leave the others high//
good job guys we jus brang him back from the other side//




congrats to whited_out and thanks to everyone who dropped a piece

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Old 07-02-02, 01:01 PM   #2
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dopeness no wonder i didn't win with a peice this good at the top keep that shit up
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Old 07-02-02, 02:39 PM   #3
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^^^ exactly. My shit was keyed up and i didnt even expect to come top three!!!
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Old 07-02-02, 06:10 PM   #4
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Good shit kid...that was the first open mic i did in a LONG ass time.....dont worry..i will be taking this weeks...

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Old 07-10-02, 03:25 PM   #5
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That was a very good piece, I enjoyed reading it
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