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Old 08-13-05, 11:37 AM   #1
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Tales From The Bronx

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This is how it goes Down in the Boggie Down...HOMIE
Dont make a sound just listen to Narcs......TRUE STORY
This is how it goes Down in the Boggie Down...HOMIE
Its the only place that its better to be ...........LONLEY
Ya dont......KNOW ME but listen to my........LIFE STORY

Born on March 5th 1989 My Moms so happy she begin to Cry
Had an older Brother by my Side Im just so glad to be Alive
My childhood went fast and such so i cant remember Much
When i turned Eleven it was the first time i rolled a dutch
Had to get high cuz in the bronx there alot of Peer Pressure
Moms had to work 2 jobs just to put 2 shirts in my Dresser
Never had a father to help out but my moms raised me Well
I hate my father so i hope his ass fucking burns in of Hell
I became thirteen and my life became unbelivable Hard
Family was still close but i had my childhood Torn Apart
At this age when i heard gunshots and seen a man dying
I was trying to be tough but of course i began Crying
My brother already on the corner Hustling N getting Doe
I was about to turn 14 and it was my turn to get my GO
My bro had 2 blunts got caught N arrested for 2 Months
My future in the corner got put on hold so for me no Funds
I was 15 and went to my first day in high school it was Hot
When i went home I found out that we jjust got Robbed
It seems like somebody had climed in thru my fire Escape
My moms crying all day so how much more can she Take
And for Gods Sake why did we have all our shit Stolen
Crime began calling but i was controlling my own Fate
So on the Date of sptember 6th we moved down South
In a great place called florida were all its always good Out
Florida is heaven compared to The Bronx no im not Kidding
Cause now im proud to say that im happy the way im Living

This is how it goes Down in the Boggie Down...HOMIE
Dont make a sound just listen to Narcs......TRUE STORY
This is how it goes Down in the Boggie Down...HOMIE
Its the only place that its better to be ...........LONLEY
Ya dont......KNOW ME but you know my........LIFE STORY
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Old 08-13-05, 12:51 PM   #2
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Old 08-13-05, 01:04 PM   #3
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this joint was pretty good, nice storyline and shit. structure was good and flow was on point.
Had to get high cuz in the bronx there alot of Peer Pressure
Moms had to work 2 jobs just to put 2 shirts in my Dresser
^^^this was my fav bar of the whole joint.
pretty good drop. 8.5/10
RETURN THE FAVOr links are in the sig
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Old 08-13-05, 01:07 PM   #4
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shit was hott^^^ flow was hottt, had good structure....up on vocab....and multis were iffy.....um this piece was good...was feelin the story/emotion 8/10.....keep elevatin man....
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Old 08-13-05, 01:32 PM   #5
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uppin............................................. .........
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Old 08-13-05, 10:29 PM   #6
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ayyo let me get in raw
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Old 08-13-05, 10:47 PM   #7
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aight fams you in RAW got to our crew forum and intruduce your self
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Old 08-13-05, 10:58 PM   #8
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wasn't bad enjoyed it but let me add something for real
hey peep mine at http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204308

Wear a dew rag thunder the skies got bags under my eyes
From lack of sleep and the facts deep now that I realize
I’m in love, look no such thing as too much bling
Jewelry brings fury to eyes, even make virgins sing
My rhymes giving nutrition because living conditions in
Some slum areas are bad, bazaar and sad just can’t grin

Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 08-13-05 at 11:07 PM.
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Old 08-13-05, 10:59 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by MADDRAPPER
wasn't bad enjoyed it but let me add something for real

Wear a dew rag thunder the skies got bags under my eyes
From lack of sleep and the facts deep now that I realize
I’m in love, look no such thing as too much bling
Jewelry brings fury to eyes, even make virgins sing
My rhymes giving nutrition because living conditions in
Some slum areas are bad, bazaar and sad just can’t grin


what was this about?but it was good thou but WTF
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