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02-24-05, 07:59 PM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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new threat...
IP: 0825 899A
finna shut down the boards wit this keystyle real quick....
you cats need to improve-a-lot before tools-get-sparked, call me 'acne' cleanser the way i make you lose-ya-'spot', school dudes until these fools-get-taught, let ya girl 'ride' like an amusement-park. been on the site for a couple second's and finna catch-some-rep,i'll hold the tech-till-death, blow ya lungs in the air....now you can 'catch'-ya-breath, no advice hear you can help-ya-self,im taking turfs land-by-land, going to hand-to-hand, leave cats shaking like a bad camera-man, 'brave' like an atlanta-fan, kid i can handle-grams, dog im buck wild i aint in to actin-quiet, starting rapping-riot, on the corner losing wieght like the atkins-diet. imma 4-shooter, wit galore-bhudda, hore-abuser, beat up folk who aint winning....now dats a 'sore-'loser... a quick freestyle.....uppin 4 feedback and tryien to see wut the sites about... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178712 Last edited by ma$term!nd : 02-24-05 at 08:38 PM. |
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02-24-05, 08:40 PM | #2 | |||||||
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he speaks....
IP: 8EF5 9EEF
returning the favor,
decent wordplay, multies were on point but they woulda had more emphasis if you changed your paragraph font, overall it was nice for a key, the sore looser at the end was a nice closer, the acni cleanser line was a nice concept as well. -gully |
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