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Absent I'm not one to complain..so a shutup about my day.. nothing but inuendo making nicknames out of my name.. I never once thought about religion as nothing but offers.. I keep thinkin if there's a god..he isn't helpin he stalling all the times I needed help..had nobody but myself.. I'm sick of all this threatening if I don't do this I go to hell.. well you can take me..put me to sleep and refrain to awake me.. all this conspirecy about ladies..who virgins but gave birth to a baby.. all this confusing isn't scary..I'll get my consiquenses later.. God threatening his so called creations he a dictator.. satan's doesn't exsist either..hell's just a room with a heater.. if It's true then if I die..I'm takin my life and repeat it.. I cut a knife and I'm bleeding..well thats's life I am leaving.. this Imprisoment I'm taking..and hating..someone who doesn't exsist.. if you religous I don't hate you..or neither tryna pursuade you.. but all this aggression I have and nobody to say to.. eternal damnation..hard to expect if he made you..and dradles.. from the jewish religion is like christmas and fables.. if I'm wrong thats my mistake..that I'm makin i'm made it.. I know I can't erase it..I made my bed I can take it.. but I have suspesions about the goverment..controllin it.. I mean they even used the metric systems you know how old it is.. Commanments are a list of mistakes..to list all your sins.. If the nigga is all around us..then where are you then?.. go and disolve me then..I'm sorry but I will just not fall in him.. these are my feelings and no magical figure can change it there's no such things as right..so no visit can save it.. we recorded all our actions..the earth's makin isn't in a atlats I'm sorry any god isn't in my classes..if he is forever absent..
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
Word... i was feelin this drop..
structure was dope.. content was insightful, well thought out and something i can identify with. Flow was on... wasnt too long or too short.. nice work. 9/10
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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yupp good job.. this is a dope semi collabo.. lmao like sweatsuit.. but yeah u dropped hot on this.. nice keystyle.... iight fam.. keep it up.. pz..
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
this was a very nice drop, content was good, and flow, and structure was nice.. but most importantly, i respect how you feel.. u make me wanna hug you..
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IP: 0825 899A
I did a poem about you like I said
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what poem about me? ...............................................
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IP: 0825 899A
its posted lol
its maybe around the top of the poetry forum
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169540
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169371
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IP: 5BF6 7B97
this was a really good piece...the flow was shaky at bits..but you lacked in flow..you picked up for in emotion and expression..and this is text..so flow doesn't even matter....a lot of the things you said in this...are things a lot of us people think of...people who actually think..instead of following a religion blindly...very good piece my friend...
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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IP: 3240 794D
nice drop keep doin yo thing bra
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IP: 6D0A ABE4
weerd fam, good shit.....
i was definetly feelin it all the way through, your flow was tight the whole verse.... it was a difficult topic too i bet, but something that you could definetly write somethin nice to if you were in the right mood... again very nice, one of the better things ive sen frfom you.....
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