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04-27-07, 12:45 PM | #1 | |||
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New Track - - - -"No Title"
IP: C248 9E60
Me and my boy did this song up at the college in one of the practice rooms for piano class. No real concept. We just got on the mic and did it.
Beat: Spontane Verses: 1 - Me 2 - Mike 3 - Me 4 - Mike www.soundclick.com/implicitus Here are the links I left feed on http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241650 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241681 |
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04-27-07, 02:04 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 48E8 2135
da flow is strate on both mcs...
1st Verse - nice message........flow is strate.......delivery is fine.......i like what ya sayin even though i'm not religious..... 2nd Verse- same message as above stickin to the topic.........flow is strate.......delivery is nice too.......strate verse 3rd Verse- same as above 4th verse - "These dudes look at their brother like Cain did Abel" i like how u used some scripture....nice verse Overall - quality wuz nice.......stuck to topic......even thoe yall didn't have a title...nice track...keep droppen....... pz ~1~ |
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04-27-07, 02:16 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
thanks for the feed..i'll leave some feed if u got somethin.
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04-27-07, 02:31 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
ayo i left some feed on your track.
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04-28-07, 01:12 PM | #5 | |||
Addicted
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IP: 6ABD 581C
I like the concept of the track....your real religious huh? thats whats up......but yea flow delivery lyrics to me was coo i think implicit had the better flow tho.....u guys have that underground flow and shit......gud shit yall keep at it =1=
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04-28-07, 05:05 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 9B2C 9A4D
beat is real funky...sounds familiar too
Love the pro-jesus lyrics! feelin both flows enjoyable track 1 |
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04-28-07, 10:22 PM | #7 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
thanks to everyone for the feed. i'll return it. this is the very first song we did together...wrote and recorded in about an hour and a half.
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04-30-07, 02:12 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
uppity up this track right heeeeere
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05-04-07, 07:54 AM | #9 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
a track like this needs a hook....its a message track the message hits harder is better remembered with a hook....i feel like your quality used to be alot worse....both dudes are cool n the voices match well....you sound a lil more polished, he has some spots where he sounds hesitant....nice oldschool feel not a bad track...but i feel its missing something...that something being a hook....nice lyrics n flow n all tho....your on the right path
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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05-04-07, 01:24 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
thanks for the feed
its funny that you mentioned the quality cause all i really did was turn the volume down..no effects or nothing but thanks for the feed..if yall drop links i can return feed |
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05-06-07, 05:06 AM | #11 | |||
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IP: C248 9E60
uppity up up this and away
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05-09-07, 02:37 PM | #12 | |||
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IP: 5E98 B05F
lets get some more feed on this thang...
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05-09-07, 02:44 PM | #13 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: E979 6945
surprisingly good quality. thought i'd be bad if u was just foolin around. dont wanna hear the lyrics. decent quality flows a bit choppy wit second dude. couple good lines. lame chorus.
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05-09-07, 07:30 PM | #14 | |||
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IP: 5E98 B05F
^^^you obviously didnt listen to the song if you said "lame chorus"..because there was actually NO CHORUS at all. thanks.
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05-09-07, 07:39 PM | #15 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: C820 C763
Not gonna leave detailed feed coz im tiirrrreeed....but...implicit u got madd betta, flows sik like the fluxuations in ya delivery, emotion is sik, i unno your styles sik
Second mans not as good but wid a bit more polishin he'd be sik, his voice is a bit like yours but deeper, an his style sounds similar, u been teachin him?? mixin sounds good, other 2 verses sound good...but shorter?? im jus too tired to feed them sorry...
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