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01-18-04, 04:54 PM
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[Adjacent Soulz]
IP: F229 1E93
Two Soulz Meetin' At Crossroads...
A Bomb Builds Up n' Blowz... A Girl Got Everything She Could... A Boy Raised Povertly In The "Hood"... Two Soulz Each Playin' Totally Different Rolez... Guess It Showz How Diverse Life Goez... One Raised In The 'Surbs Full Of Love n' Care... One Born Ghetto Living A Life Of Dispair... Life Ain't Fair When Social Classes Interfere... One Full Of Happiness - The Other Sheddin' - A Daily Tear n' A Gun Culture To Fear, However... One Runs A Mile - When She Sense's Danger is Near... The Other Stands To Fight, A Criminal Insight... A Girl Beautiful, Exquisite Possesses White Light... A Flame Ignites But It's Darkened By The Thugs Life... She's On Easy Street While He's Had To Brutally Strife... But It Showz Two Distantly Touching Soulz... n' How Each Social Group - Plays Different Rolez... Two Soulz Meetin' At Crossroads... A Bomb Builds Up n' Blowz... A Girl Got Everything She Could... A Boy Raised Povertly In The "Hood"... Last edited by RythmicTendicies : 01-20-04 at 03:52 PM. |
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01-19-04, 06:44 AM
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IP: A04B E7DD
unbelievably slept on.
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01-19-04, 08:06 AM
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IP: 6F9E F23B
a decent lil drop here.... the bar length was short, but the flow was carried well.... and a nice lil concept going.... what else can i say.... i jus dont like using capitals at the begining of each word,, but thats irrelevent... so.... yeah nice
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01-19-04, 08:32 AM
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IP: 6F9E F23B
this was a gud piece...liked it...quite ill
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01-19-04, 11:35 AM
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IP: A04B E7DD
uppin
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01-19-04, 11:46 AM
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IP: CF61 4449
really good piece... stuck on topic...
went from thug, to gurl from burbs... nice piece good structure n flow had some mults in there.... yo return the favor n peep my open mic its in my sig... _-SyaNidal-_
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01-19-04, 12:00 PM
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IP: CC27 D3DF
Sya nidel u sound like a pissed off rapper that never made it.
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01-19-04, 02:30 PM
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IP: CEA5 B505
^who the fuck are you^
I'll hit your shit up soon dawg...uppin', |
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01-19-04, 04:11 PM
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IP: CC27 D3DF
who the fuck are u above me
i cant believe that im hearin all this ravin and rantin from rythmic tendicies u better get ur ass back to work if think that those corny ass raps will work |
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01-20-04, 10:45 AM
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IP: 9D14 B015
^please kill yourself...^
uppin' |
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01-20-04, 10:52 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..short..but..very nice..very good content..to go along with flow and worplay..nice~
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01-20-04, 12:46 PM
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IP: 6D25 00B6
Keep droppin dogg, that was dope!!
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01-20-04, 03:07 PM
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IP: F229 1E93
^and that was not a proper reply^
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01-20-04, 03:36 PM
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IP: 4287 3F49
Two Soulz Each Playin' Totally Different Rolez...
Guess It Showz How Diverse Like Goez... i believe u meant to say Life instead of Like. dope ass drop like Pen said kinda short but full of good shit.U could've flipped this and made it kinda like a story where they meet or whatnot. U have passed tha test of dopeness,i will know read your recent drops in here just PM me wit the link. Holla at ya kin folk |
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01-20-04, 03:51 PM
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IP: F229 1E93
^cheers for pointing out the spelling error...can;t believe it's taken 8 replies to notice it...lol^
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