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Old 01-25-06, 06:24 PM   #1
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

VOTE FOR FEATURED TRACK OF THE MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!

Description: Somethin i felt like doin when i was bored.. lol

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3300552
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Old 01-25-06, 06:44 PM   #2
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Listening...

Isn't this that Paparazzi beat..?

It's dope.

Vocals come a little loud...flow is pretty good...lyrics are basic, but straight. Wasn't feelin the hook...too basic for my liking, but sounds good. Quality is good...flow falls off a bit in the second verse...but it's still good.

Good shit.

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Old 01-25-06, 06:56 PM   #3
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werd, thx, oh and the hook is freestyled i forgot to mention that lol
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Old 01-25-06, 07:07 PM   #4
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i like the beat
turn the vocals down a bit
quality is ok
flow is off in a few places
hook is booty lol
you came likt too hyped for this track i think
flow was the same throughout work on switching it up a bit
overall 6.5/10
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Old 01-25-06, 08:35 PM   #5
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nice beat...nice Flow ahha paparazi by Xibit ahhaa koo shit and nice choice....hmm maybe in the chorus u can change it up but its koo nice shit get at me sometime for a collab or suttin aight kid? and Return the Favor
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contemplate a de-esser in ur mixing process

vocal levels are nice here

flow is good

beat is kinda lovely


delivery on the hook is good, would sound better with more "chorus" effect = more layers


pretty solid drop homie



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