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12-30-04, 01:08 PM | #1 | |||||
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Just Flowin!!!
IP: 2421 3211
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168693 This Power Drunkened Society Compromises My Minds Sobriety In MOck Piety A Scheme IS Devised to Wrench My-Life-From-Me The Black Man...Earths First and Forgotten Son The Intellect Of HUmanity iTs Such a Tragedy to Go from Imperial to Poverty, .........................................Dubbed Nigger In Place of Your Majesty Baffled by One Calamity after Another as We Tackle Lifes Upredictable Storm HArsh Reality is Embraced MEan ...................While the Mythical Realm of the American Dream is Torn Weary and Worn out Are My People Tired of Discrimatory Actions of Hate Tired of Bowing Down To the Whip of Oppresion,Agression is all we been ...........................Shown So thats All We Can Immulate Dying Spiritually My People Reach Out To Objects That Worsen There Predictament Things such as Diamonds and Pearls Were a Africans House Hold Items,Now UP held With SUch Redicolous Prestige...God HElp Me, Help Us.. For We Are Mere Men In Dire Need of Restoration Bless are Nation of Brother and Sisters With your Salvation |
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12-30-04, 06:05 PM | #2 | |||||
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uppin.....4..........more.............feedback
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12-30-04, 08:26 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
fix the structure.. flow went so so at times
but vocab was coo though..good at that so i give you like a 7/10
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12-31-04, 02:25 PM | #4 | |||||
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ok thanx my niggas ill keep that in mind
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01-01-05, 11:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
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uppin....................
4............. feed back!!!
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01-01-05, 11:38 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 775C 64E4
bad structure.... some filler, but overall, not the worst
keep it up, elavate |
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01-02-05, 01:26 AM | #7 | |||||||
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ROFL huh!?!?!.......................................... ..
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01-02-05, 09:16 PM | #8 | |||||||
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uppin....................
4............. feed back!!!
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