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08-04-04, 02:54 PM | #1 | ||||||
New to RB
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Quick 16-Freestyle
IP: 3E4C EA5E
Standin in the vicinity
of a million enemies guns cocked makin sure these cowards drop from one shot ima young thug tryna make it to the pearly gates but these haters tryna send me to an early grave ima mother fuckin soldier until its over prayin that my enemies'll drop dead from a couple shots to the head my eyed shot red fillin these cowards up wit hot lead Im feelin like 50 cent thats why i send 50 im from the gutter, muthafucka, where shit aint pretty if u hate me u can come and get me ima die a muthafuckin soldier reppin 4 my city |
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08-04-04, 04:50 PM | #2 | |||
Banned
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IP: 19F7 7629
dag, short lines are not always that good, especillay when u got only like 2 to 3 words in a sentence, u wasnt creative ya lines was basic and simple no multis no punch no noting, just work alot harder is all the advice i can give u....
2.0 outta 10 |
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