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Old 02-13-04, 03:27 AM   #1
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Angelic Kiss~Demonic Seduction

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Softly her eyes open with a sleepy roll
Shallow breathing echo in the breeze
Darkness casting shadows upon the bare walls
Chills of eerie presence in wait

Outside the owl hollers a warning cry
Lurking within the dead trees as he watches
Her eyes reflecting the night's soft light
As she gazes at her vanishing reflection in the window

Sitting up she shakes softly as she faces the demon
Knowing he lurks outside her bedroom walls
Watching her lustfully as she awakens in fear
Waiting for the moment to prey upon her innocent soul

She has yet to see him eye to eye
Feeling his chilled breath upon her flesh
Entrapped by his violent energies of black soul
Seduced by his glacial aura of evil impurity

And he enters her private lair of solace
Creeping noiselessly as she gazes into the night
The blood moon gleaming its crimson glow with vile grace
Hauntingly calming her racing pulse

He injects himself into her veins
Drowning deep within her intoxicating life's essence
Staining the purity she was instilled by the gods
Tainting the heart of which could melt a glacier

She lays down again upon the pillow and closes her eyes
Taking her last mortal breath embarking on an eternal journey
Dying with the whisper of a promise of beauty
Denied of the ugly purity she so willingly then shed






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Seeming innocent, naughtiness stealth
Bubble gum kisses to tease your soul
Just hold me tight and I'll be in your control.
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Old 02-13-04, 03:30 AM   #2
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well...i didnt know rape was this good
the images shown here were very nicely portrayed
the hint of erotisicm kept me interested
and the rhyme scheme was nicely done...very easy and nice read
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