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08-27-05, 03:00 PM | #1 | ||||
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..Anticipation..
IP: 8A05 210E
...i'm doin a spin-off of T.I.P's "Motivation" joint..it'z about time i set tha record str8 & diz is a song decidated 2 ne & evabody who is against me FUCK U!!...
[Intro] ...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation) ...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation) ...If u faggots don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation) ...Ya hataz can't stand me par, it'z best u keep footin along, nigga... ...If u niggaz want Beef, i'm down 4 Confrontation... ...i'll Freeze Ya Mind Up, when i put Cold Steel 2 ya Head without Hesitation... ...takin me 4 a joke, shit bitch u must got me mistaken 4 a Trick... ...i'm not in a Gang, but luv 2 c ur Blood Drip afta i let my gun start 2 Crip... ...cuz i'm sick of tha Stunts, u niggaz tryin 2 pull hopin nobody Notice... ...when it'z obvious y'all r no where near Talented wit ur I.P sho'in Novice... ...like in a Whip, i Mash Tha Gas & Accelerate on tha track wit Aggression... ...when alot of u Un-Skilled Emcees, jus sit back & b 2nd Guessin... ...half of y'all neva even did a Crime, or let alone even seen a Burna... ...98% of ya get Sick & Throw Up, when it comes time 4 u 2 Murder... ...i pay no attention 2 tha lines, dat most of u Clowns b Spitin... ...i guarantee u dat most of it'z played out or jus plain Bitin... ...most hate cuz i have tha skills dat dey wanna Possess... ...i lay in Anticipation waiting 4 u Bitches 2 come & test... Anticipation Niggaz hatin tryna bring me mo' stress...(Anticipation) Wanna put an end 2 my process...(It'z Anticipation) U snakes wanna block my shine...(Anticipation) I got sumthang 2 put on ya mind...(Anticipation) Y'all must think dat i'm a hoe...(Anticipation) I guess i gotta continue 2 let niggaz know...(It'z Anticipation) Suckaz niggaz think dey can take me under... My problem solva will blast, & leave dem wrapped in white coverz...(Anticipation) ...if i hit Rock Bottom, niggaz Happy 2 C...
...jus cuz when i Rhyme, Pressure is applied makin it hard 4 dem 2 Breathe... ...i'm stay on my Q'z & P'z, & neva get Caught Slippin off my Feet... ...tha only way u niggaz will eva b Great, is if u try 2 go & Repeat... ...Laugh, & Lie 2 ya friends bout how ur tha Best at diz Rap Shit... ...u'll get Pimped all ova tha track, dat people will believe ur my Bitch... ...Punk Bitches, r gonna start Bowing Down 2 me & Face Tha Facts... ...dat U & 50 Cent raps, r 1 in tha same, dat means y'all shit is Wack... ...my lyrics r Efficient, Unbearable & leave alot of people in a Haze... ...while urs r Contained, Apprehensive, & like Prisoners stay locked in a Cage... ...i'm in a Rage, cuz tha lyme verses i hear now & dayz r way out of Date... ...coming Slicka, & wit more Original Concepts den ne otha dat luv 2 Hate... ...so if it'z issues u wanna resolve wit me, pick ne time either Night or Day... ...Anticipation Level is building, i'm Unyielding, so fuck ur crew & ne of y'all Feelings... o yea here's my link also: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206217
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me Last edited by Payn : 08-27-05 at 08:14 PM. |
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08-27-05, 03:06 PM | #2 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: 05EA A558
Damn why arent you still in TT
this shit was nice |
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08-27-05, 06:48 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 8A05 210E
thanx homie i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed it'll b returned
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-28-05, 04:12 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
damn this is ok,good deep read..nice drop.
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08-28-05, 10:21 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 8A05 210E
still uppin 4 more feed ...stop sleepin on diz 1 here
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-28-05, 11:00 AM | #6 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A0F2 0238
to much gun play n misdirected lines...
you'll be good if you stay workin at it
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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08-28-05, 01:44 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 8A05 210E
ight i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed diz time give me constructive criticism instead of jus tha obvious
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-29-05, 12:15 AM | #8 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
this was a solid piece, real gangsta lol ya know?......your structure was iight....but i wasnt feelin the font and colors...a little eye soring....you had excellent wordplay and good rhyme scheme the hook was nice......overall a solid drop...7.5/10...keep it comen fam
and get at me if you eva want to do a collab o yea ya vocab was tight too good job
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08-29-05, 10:03 AM | #9 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 76ED 6199
erm aight drop consistent in aspects but a little too ya know?stop talkni bout the same thing nice vocab nice flow overall 6/10
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08-29-05, 10:29 AM | #10 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 82A5 4BFD
I don't really enjoy reading pieces like this but anyway. The concept was uhm grimey and gangsta I suppose and that's the overall vibe it gave me as well. The vocab was on point, had some interesting shit in there, good lines with nice wordplay but I feel you could've used some more variation and creativity you know. The flow was good though.
Keep at it!
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08-29-05, 11:30 PM | #11 | |||||||
RV aint Dead
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IP: 974F 131D
its was dope and nice way of using T.I's
Motivation its was a decent drop and decent vocabulary ovarall ma nig u get a 9 out of 10
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08-29-05, 11:39 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 8A05 210E
dat'z wazzup much luv 2 all tha real good & bad constructive criticism & not bs stuff jus comin out tha side of ya mouth fa sho
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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