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03-09-03, 12:18 AM | #1 | ||||||
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vs. Round One At RTM..Drop Links!!
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click here for High Fidelity Click here For Low Fidelity.. Drop Links...i'LL Reply To Your Tracks.... Editted To Put In Page Link If Outside Links Aint Working... www.soundclick.com/fathernelson Vs. Fi-Seek.. Last edited by Luke C-Walker : 03-09-03 at 01:44 AM. |
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03-09-03, 05:59 PM | #2 | ||||||
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ya flow is a lil off, work on that, emotion is not there... quality is not great but i can understand ya lyrics... tooo short, no real hard punches.. beat was aight... ya rhyme scheme was aight too..Just work on ya emotion, and flowin with the beat... elevate and ill be peepin ya shit..holla
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03-09-03, 11:48 PM | #3 | ||||||
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ight thanks or peepin...uppin..
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03-10-03, 03:22 AM | #4 | |||||||
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checked it for you
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03-10-03, 05:30 AM | #5 | ||||||
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yeah....
the flow is off a bit. ya' need to pronounce ya' words better. some decent punches in here... In The Club/ 50 punches are already played to death. g'luck (peep come fukk wit us) |
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03-10-03, 07:09 AM | #6 | ||||||
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REAL Die-Verse...That 50 cent line was aiight in mine tho cuz it was a personal..he did a track called In Da Pub..etc...whatever tho...i put like no effort into this..just got bored and figured id record it at 11:30 at night when im mad tired,but ok..i dont know why i did that tho..whatever,lol peace.
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03-10-03, 09:27 AM | #7 | |||||||
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I thought this beat was sick..... your lyrics were pretty hype.. "serve you like tea and crumpets..." hahaha.. that's good, flow does need improvment, quality's pretty good...
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03-10-03, 03:46 PM | #8 | ||||||
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yeah...flow just improves with time tho...so yeah...but thanks for peepin..
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