Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines MINIMUM
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

don't no show

verse due 24 hours after check-in

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 12:14 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:17 AM.

¥D's Money¥ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:17 AM.

yo proverse dis is yo boy d
i bout to show u what's up like dem niggas in greese
this is like runnin a marathon and u gettin yo ass whooped
after i'm done with dis rhyme u gonna think i'm a crook

Where u at proverse, lets get this shit started
as long as i've been waitin i think yo ass is retarted
you fuckin suck nuts, just like yo gurl
yes bitch i am black and i roc a jerry curl
hurry up and spit yo shit back so u can get beat
then take yo ass to bed, fuck around and beat yo meat!!!

plenty of under grad "post" <so much you can "mail" sissy
you can't produce a good verse<and you hail frompharrel city
sub par rhymes come plenty< and still wit rap you come empty
wins can't have it<full of confidense<but, unable to back-it
caused by your ways< of feeding off verses like a savage
your rhymes generic< but, yet predictabiltiy suthes me
cuz readin your verse< like knowing the end of a movie
you're stuck with your rep< similar to sore commit
everytime u spit anoher line<is like a sequal to a horror flick
"crappy" rhymes<so your prewrites< is like you storin "shit"

damn dey strcutured my shit wrong

i sware i made it alot different when i posted

damn iam lose votes for this

Voted For: ¥D's Money¥

u got this one D's Money Proverse's made no sense what so ever

DICK RIDERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

check bitch slapped dey supose 2 be friends and shit

diss shit bout 2 be DQ'd

yo dey cut off my verse cuz itwasnt respondin

we gotta make a new thread

and anyway you're dq'd because you didnt meet the line limit

what kind of shit u talkin bitch don' be mad cause u got that ass whooped

fuck u bitch i got my fuckin lines u need to get yo shit strait mothafucka
one thang to remember i am da yungest in charge u you need to learn betta english
befo you step in my yard!!!

nigga

neither of us met the time LIMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we both DQ'd dumb fuck lol

in the rules it said 10 lines

i wrote 10 lines but they cut off half my verse when the site wasn't responding
das why none of the lines rhyme dumbass

so the battle thread will be closed

na bitch da rules said 6-8 so don't even try that bull shit