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Old 08-25-06, 03:26 PM   #1
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Lightless


Somewhere in this dying day
If I could only find a way for my escape,
I find it hard to concentrate with all my past mistakes...

I can feel my faith, Can't recall my crime,
I think I sealed my fate, Along the way I must have lost my mind,
I guess we're all damaged in our own way alone in our own way,
Distant headlights on a desolate highway....

You ever wake up to life, so cold it's not real,
Hope to save the light for a moment to feel,
A moment to steal from what you thought had passed,
Hoping to feel that fear from your past, at last,
It's not me alone, standing in the cold, no direction to home,
Standing in the freeze as I slowly erode,

Life destroyed half this body, figure head to end lives,
Have I survived?
Breathe can't I, Can't feel the knife,
Widen on this grip, can find confessions of a fallen king,
I'd give almost anything, not to be alive today....

Like a miracle, blood drenched and breatheless,
Enemies helped hench a necklace,
This rope round my throat,
All stoked in hopes to cut the throat of a joke...
A joke's what they say anyway,
Like if I lived to see another day or not
It woudn't matter if I stay in one spot
Or move to the top,
I'm runnin fast but not goin anywhere,
Watchin my enemies stare,
All hopin I'll fall, sittin on the sides callin the calls,
Like they could play the same if it was them with the ball?!
Fuck you fuck them, fuck everyone I see,
I'm get up here and spread words like a disease
Fuck this shit, it'll only hurt till I'm free
Of this mind, racin and pacin,
Memory erasin, forgettin the past again,
Like WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENIN?
My names just a shadow,
Shrouded in oblivion.....

I can't feel my faith, can't recall my crime,
I think I sealed my fate, along the way I must have lost my mind,
I guess we're all damaged in our own way,
Alone in our own way....
Distant headlights......
Desolate highway.
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Old 08-25-06, 05:10 PM   #2
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i was feeling it ,it reminded me of how i used to feel,but goodwork ,we need more of that

but can you give me some feedback on mine

heads 2 da sky -wiley d
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Old 09-01-06, 04:48 PM   #3
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post two links to others opens mics you have left feedback on or this will be closed.
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