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Old 12-10-05, 10:33 PM   #1
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Devils Rejeccts Pt 2 Ft Ghost
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yea....once again!!!

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i replied to....every thread in this forum today so...yea check one
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 12-11-05, 08:06 PM   #2
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Old 12-13-05, 12:42 PM   #3
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CHO...ur very lyrical and most of the time it's nice...If ur gonna use that fast flow, then u need to delivery or control the PUNCHES or RHYMING parts a little better so that I can feast on EVERYTHING you said...I'm not sayin slow down, but rather just articulate the main parts more so that people can appreciate everything you say...

flow is generally on...not bad dawg


Ghost...ur verse went by so fast I missed it...I didn't like ur flow...it was choppy and sounded like u talked it...


this collab was lacking on a whole



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Old 12-15-05, 01:34 AM   #4
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thx man....................
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 12-15-05, 04:37 AM   #5
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first guy has coo lyrics....flow and delivery fell off in a few spots nuttin major...second guys flow and delivery were aight...lyrics were str8...over-all coo shit just brush up the delivery and production.
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Old 12-15-05, 10:39 AM   #6
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aight peepin now.....the beats intro was kinda ehh sketchy......sounds like someone watching a t.v.......the first up......is good but the flow dont ride the beat right.....it dont sound round...its too robotic.....meeh.....its decent tho......but ya lyrics and ur pressense make up for that.........the hook is uhh kinda weird....a tv??? thats kinda weeird.....alllright second person....i like this more..ya flow was better and ur pressense was nice..u just gotta have better emotion and it'd be a lot better u'll get it over time tho.....sounds like its just gettin read of the paper..this is a alright trick tho...:7/10
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