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12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-07-05 at 01:55 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

E-Clipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 01:31 PM.

I laugh at this dick, really he poses no lyrical threat
Packin’ E-Style, yea but he loses it when he signs off the net
Batter this fucka bloody and leave his ass unsteady
Cuz unlike his sig, this kids style, it just ain’t Red-E (ready)
Ure weak with no skill, so don’t expect the praise
Cuz I’ll only ‘need to spit’ to ‘extinguish this Young Blaze’
Kid ain’t gangsta, its hide ‘n’ seek that he likes to play
Cuz he’s dope at it, he’s the only kid who gets to hide all day
But yo, I’ll make ya the centre of attention when I beat ya fast
Cuz I’ll beat yo face in and have it swollen up like J-Lo’s ass
Yea I’m done with you now, quick to diminish ya game
And set fire to yo ass to add some REAL flare to ya name

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Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 01:45 PM.

Ight......
Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned
Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse
tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes
sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil
Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.
Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....

^^^(Be Ezay--E...lol)

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Voted For: Young Blaze

E-Clipse

I laugh at this dick, really he poses no lyrical threat
Packin’ E-Style, yea but he loses it when he signs off the net
^uhm decent opener, could've worked crew shit out differently 5/10

Batter this fucka bloody and leave his ass unsteady
Cuz unlike his sig, this kids style, it just ain’t Red-E (ready)
^nice punch with personal touch in it as well 8/10

Ure weak with no skill, so don’t expect the praise
Cuz I’ll only ‘need to spit’ to ‘extinguish this Young Blaze’
^nameplay was been done before and a lot even but still good punch 7/10[/b]

Kid ain’t gangsta, its hide ‘n’ seek that he likes to play
Cuz he’s dope at it, he’s the only kid who gets to hide all day
^cool bar, nothing too special though, sort of filler 6/10

But yo, I’ll make ya the centre of attention when I beat ya fast
Cuz I’ll beat yo face in and have it swollen up like J-Lo’s ass
^good wordplay second line, decent bar 6/10

Yea I’m done with you now, quick to diminish ya game
And set fire to yo ass to add some REAL flare to ya name
^good word/nameplay, nice punch 8/10

Total: 40/60 = 67%, good verse but I feel you might have added more creativity here and
there you know. Flow is good though, vocab is nice as well. Just up a little more on
personals and more consistent original wordplay.


Young Blaze

Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned
^nice personal touch in last line, first one's bleh 7/10[/b]

Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse
^hehe, good wordplay in second line again 7/10[/b]

tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes
^lmao...funny shit man, got me rolling 8/10[/b]

sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil
^good wordplay, punch could've been harder though 6/10[/b]

Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.
^cool shit but always hitting on his name gets boring 6/10[/b]

Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....
^haha, good wordplay formed into nice punch 8/10[/b]

Total: 42/60 = 70%, solid verse, might improve a bit on those first lines and make them seem less than simple fillers
you know. Flow was nice, vocab had good complexity to it. Kept on playing his name so might add a bit more variation to it.
Personal touches were good though and consistent as well.

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Voted For: Young Blaze

okay decent battle although to me onesided....

young - fire verse...let me break it down

Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned
Good opener, multis and a creative punch...

Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse
Decent, not special but okay

tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes
NIce....funny punch...lol...like that

sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil
hot hot punch, loved this, very original...dope

Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.
HaHaHa.....you gotta laugh, thats dope

Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....
Nice closer, again creative and original

Overall - Dope vERse Young!!!

E-Clipse -

o.k this was an alrite verse but to be honest nothin stands out just some average punches but nothin really hit hard, im explaining here but I got no quotables and on this occasion that summed up this battle....keep droppin

good but on this occasion no way near gud enough

Peace

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Voted For: Young Blaze

omfg u owned dat nigga

YOUNG BLAZE
Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned(NICE ASS OPENER)
Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse(DAYUM DAT SHIT WUZ DA BEST LINE OF DA BATTLE)
tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes(IIGHT IIGHT FEELN DAT)
sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil(DAYUM DAT SHIT WUZ NICE)
Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.(OH SHIT NICE)
Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....(NICE CLOSURE)

YOUNG BLAZE- yo shit wuz on point nigga. lemme start it off by sayin errthing flowed nicely for u. yo punches and personals hit hard as shit n da rhymes u used were str8 killin. Ur structure cudda been a lil bit betta, but dats iight. Iuno wat else ta say mayne yo shit was damn near flawless.
9.5/10

E clipse
I laugh at this dick, really he poses no lyrical threat
Packin’ E-Style, yea but he loses it when he signs off the net(O.K OPENER)
Batter this fucka bloody and leave his ass unsteady
Cuz unlike his sig, this kids style, it just ain’t Red-E(NICE ONE) (ready)
Ure weak with no skill, so don’t expect the praise
Cuz I’ll only ‘need to spit’ to ‘extinguish this Young Blaze’(HAHA IM FEELIN DAT ONE MAYNE)
Kid ain’t gangsta, its hide ‘n’ seek that he likes to play
Cuz he’s dope at it, he’s the only kid who gets to hide all day(UMMMMM.........NOT THAT GOOD)
But yo, I’ll make ya the centre of attention when I beat ya fast
Cuz I’ll beat yo face in and have it swollen up like J-Lo’s ass(MEH)
Yea I’m done with you now, quick to diminish ya game
And set fire to yo ass to add some REAL flare to ya name(DECENT CLOSURE)

E CLIPSE- I wuz feelin sum of yo shit n sum of it wuznt really hittn. I like ur personals and punches throughout tha battle, but it wuznt HARD. Some of ya rhymes came weak but were used in a good way which made ur verse betta. If u came harder wit sum of ya rhymes u wudda had a shot. Structure wuz str8 n easy ta read.
8/10 decent verse

BEST LINE OF WHOLE BATTLE- "Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse"
Dat wuz da knockout punch mayne
PROPS TA BOF YALL ON A DECENT BATTLE, but i jus felt dat Young Blaze brought da HEAT on dis 1

v/YB

ay yo cud u rtf an honest vote on mah battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207401
^^It wud b appreciated

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Voted For: Young Blaze

I laugh at this dick, really he poses no lyrical threat
Packin’ E-Style, yea but he loses it when he signs off the net
^^not bad, but seen this kinda thing before
Batter this fucka bloody and leave his ass unsteady
Cuz unlike his sig, this kids style, it just ain’t Red-E (ready)
^^ok
Ure weak with no skill, so don’t expect the praise
Cuz I’ll only ‘need to spit’ to ‘extinguish this Young Blaze’
^^not bad nameplay
Kid ain’t gangsta, its hide ‘n’ seek that he likes to play
Cuz he’s dope at it, he’s the only kid who gets to hide all day
^^okish
But yo, I’ll make ya the centre of attention when I beat ya fast
Cuz I’ll beat yo face in and have it swollen up like J-Lo’s ass
^^nah
Yea I’m done with you now, quick to diminish ya game
And set fire to yo ass to add some REAL flare to ya name
^^heh, ok

vs.

Like Childern Chewin on Fake Pistols Check me Spit Tech Gunz
u aint got 2 wait three hundred years to see E Clipse Get Sunned
^^quite nice
Talking Shit, while i'm Walkin Tha Strip,n u'll get Popped N Tha Hip
cuz its like "Skeletons" da way ain't 'NO BODY' Rockin Wit Clipse
^^ok
tell every one to place their bets n Double Their Limits
cuz ur trying to tell Me about sex...when "E-Clipse"..
...................................only last a Couple Of Minutes
^^heh not bad
sound Like u Piss In a Tremble, im ahead of u, ya Missin the LeveL
got dough my Chips Earned, ill leave "Lipse Burned"..
.................................................. like Kissin the Devil
^^slightly stretched nameplay but nice idea
Dis rook Doomed To Destruction, ya Text Consumed In Abduction
U fallin Cuz i Trip Feet, im givin "Clipse Beats"...
..................................like the Neptunes Production.
^^okish
Hurl Wit My Palm I Slap This Scared Girl Wit A Bomb an Gat
I Stay Above "E" Like Jerry-Curls In A Compton Hat....
^^ok

I think Young Blaze just took this cos of slightly better consistency with punching and slightly better flow, more multies
not a bad battle

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

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