Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 02:14 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

TennQuakes has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:15 PM.

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:18 PM.

yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death

[QUOTE=TennQuakes]yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death im the one who made u lose you health
need i say more my words are louder than yo actions

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Voted For: Acuity

what the fuck was this...this was one sided.....pucnhes personals, flow, creativity, wordplay, vocab and definitely structure goes to AC.....MISMATCH

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Voted For: Acuity

Why did I keystyle ten on this bitch made wannabe, His rhymes are so fuckin wack
His structure weak like hes got depleted vitamin C, so its easy to break his back
TennQuakes sees me and gets "shook", and hes left confused and dazed
Look i dont lie: this punk ass herb posting battle callouts in the wrong place

VS

yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch

well acuity wins hands down, try not to have the lines so stretched though. Acuity had the better and some funny punches, and he had nice structure and decent flow.

Tenn: keep elevating your punches didn't hit that hard, concentrate on dissing your opponent and work on structure

So overall I voted for acuity

please return the favor please.

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Voted For: Acuity

well this is an easy battle to vote on nah mean.
Acuity took this in every catergory i think. Tennquakes didnt come hard at all. his verse was way to juvenile n he aint really have no punches or multies or nehtin to vote on really. he just needs to get better so he can come harder
opener=acuity
closer=acuity
punches=acuity
structure=acuity
vocab=acuity
yall both need to work on ya flows tho, alot of acuity's punches were a real stretch to connect.
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

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