Rap or Die

Hitchcock: I'd just like to let yall know, this is how we live, its rap or die


Squad-Up:
Look, im about to put my foot down
These rappers is outta season, time you got took down
Squad-Up nigga im the first line of defense
Tre-8 blast, have ya brains lyin on the side of the fence
Im smokin out a bottle of that coca-cola
The bolder holda, wit mo razr's than motorola
My aim like Joe's its sloppppy, the wrist rocky
You'll be gettin it done, until ya chick spot me
Oh well, its just another whore in the game
Bright lights in the sky if you ignorin the name
Treat ya like a family portrait, put 4 in ya frame
Dog, stick home, or get snapped like a wishbone
I was born to spit, born to rip, born to flip
When im done wit the game, yall is born to quit
Come through and squash all the haters in the room
BOOM, now ya face got mo craters than the moon

Chorus:
[Hitchcock]
Puffin on the haze, gettin deep in my mind
Getup in the booth, so i can get up on the grind
Yeeeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son...
What!?.....Cheeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son...
Can't get enough of the lyrics and the beats
Keep my ear to the hood, and my spirit in the streets
Yeeeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son
What!?......Cheeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son....


Squad-Up
What it is? Im on a long run
And you know the boy aint gon stop until the jobs done
I rob funds, wit a collection of mob guns
Never stuck around the scene when the law comes
I could make a whole grip....wit no hits
And I dont need Ne-Yo to tell me im so sick
You blow dick, im just gettin on my grown shit
My whole clique aint never let the dough slip
Thats just a precursor to the murder
We about them Hardees drugs, coke flip like burgers
Agassi on the block, im the best server
You niggas stuck where you at, never get further
Ya crew scatter when the Uzi is DUMPIN...DUMPIN
My hood like Destinys Child, JUMPIN....JUMPIN
Got this shit in my veins, like im addicted to rap
What up, its Squad up ....Bitch niggas put ya guard up


Chorus:
[Hitchcock]
Puffin on the haze, gettin deep in my mind
Getup in the booth, so i can get up on the grind
Yeeeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son...
What!?.....Cheeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son...
Can't get enough of the lyrics and the beats
Keep my ear to the hood, and my spirit in the streets
Yeeeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son
What!?......Cheeeeeeah We RAP or DIE son....

Lets go, dont body yaself shorty...its the Cartel....Hitchcock what up!

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

heres my 2 links

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3077454
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234887

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

I liked this but it seemed pushed but still flowed well...Nice work...Hey Im looking for a crew and I need 8 guys Im offering 5k rv cash to decent guys and 10 k to the better guys WEEKLY....so get back at me.

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that shit was good, i thought the second verse was better with the multis but the first had more lines that stood out... i would recommend more multis and some work on meta's... but other than that it was alright...

ight shawty, thanks for that feedback, uppin this right here

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

ya first verse was either wack or a lil more than wack to me
first verse i give a 5/10
second verse i give a 8.5 /10
i think you started to think more on the second verse and thats why it came out so good


i was feeling this part when you said:

I rob funds, wit a collection of mob guns
Never stuck around the scene when the law comes
I could make a whole grip....wit no hits
And I dont need Ne-Yo to tell me im so sick
You blow dick, im just gettin on my grown shit

oh yeah and give me feedback on mine



i aint got time(is love really worth it ?????)-wiley d

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

I thought this was pretty good. It wasn't complex but I like it better that way it shows it wasn't forced. The flow was on point. I like self glorification when its done right and yours was done good to an extent. I see you have some talent some of it was tight and some of it wasn't. If you can be consistent then you got it.

Hit this om up please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235182

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If you were given freedom by the same people who made you into a slave, then do you really know what freedom is and have you ever experienced it at all?

-Immortal Technique

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

thanks fo the feedback shawty............................
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up