My clout divine like an outline make cats shout for nines
Then other brothers just pout all the times and should resign
Twist creed just to mislead with interpretation this is not
A perfect nation enough of the bluff just to get stuff with plot
Recognize these days how they advertise and praise god
So they say but anyway plenty sway and I see flaw odd
Need steady instruction to make ready for production of true
Policy of new quality then we can prosper and corruption is through

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come on yall need a response

You can rhyme, good job, now do if you can just make sense, you might have something.


Hard life being a Christian, world's got our hands twisted
behind our backs, we tryin to act moral, but all we get is
nothin but quarrel from people like you
don't judge till you walk in people's shoes, then you'll figure
out its not just about you.

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3 nails + 1 cross = 4given
No matter how good you are there's always someone better.
I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be.

damn thought you didn't understand? look all my stuff make sense if you take time to read it lot of cats on here overrated get prop for simple verses

Make a title for your open mics!!!!!!

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OneStepBeyond thanks for the critique for real

Anytime dawg....

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