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06-03-04, 10:48 AM | #1 | |||||||
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I'm New To The Site And I Be On Da Other One Too........... I'm A Female Emcee From MurdaLand (NOT B-MORE!!!!)
Here Go Sumthin From A Flow Dat's Not Finished Yet........... Name's L A T A Female Emcee Dreamin Of Stackin G's Till They High As The Sky On A Sunny Day In Da Chi Wit Ice On My Wrist Sittin In Da Six Sippin On Cris Smokin Dat Hish High As Shit Gurls Ridin Wit Me Security Six Deep Dead Presidents In A Big Heap Fame And Fortune I'd Love To Keep Wood Grain On Da Dash Dro In Da Stash 100 G's In Cash Bein Broke Is Part Of T's Past Gotta Keep Writin Dis Shit Gotta Last Can't Go Back To Dreamin Like A Crack Addict Feignin Dat Shit Aint Where It's At I Want Pockets Always Fat Lockets All In Plat All Types Of Shoes In On Da Rack Platinum Plaques On Da Wall Diamond Studded Gucci Thongs It's Either Rap Or Nothing At All School Ain't Goin So Well Tryin And Tryin Only To Fail I'm Goin Through Hell Tryna Make My Parents Proud The Silence of Dissapointment Is Just So Loud Secret Whisperings As I Leave The Room Slowly Sealing My Diamond Encrusted Tomb................... Not Finished Yet
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L-A-T Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics In Holy Water No Wonder Dey Tryna Hold Me Under Longer -Eminem "Renegade" Dat Gurl Wit Da Vicious Flows And Tight Thighs Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife -Love And Tears LAT |
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06-03-04, 11:49 AM | #2 | ||||||
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fat pockets, wood grain, stackin g's, sippin cris, platinum plaques?....
the last part of your verse was a little more personal...the first part was commercial crap....seems like it might flow well, but you're lacking some content...alot.... work on wordplay and feed off of your pain...hip hops alot more than stackin g's.... My name's kleetus kleaver...this is my first post...keep it up....be easy.. |
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06-03-04, 07:05 PM | #3 | |||||||
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nice, keep elevatin, welcome
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06-03-04, 07:07 PM | #4 | ||||
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Welcome BabeGyal' ..!!!! - - - !! Elevate' ... And Its All Good From there On
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