checkin in, im going 12

im not losin again

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2769599

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dayum, i suck..
brendan check tha av, you know what im about to do

give me an extension TeamOne...imma drop my verse at 12:30

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^^
T been losin more than i have. when textceein, ur really the worse.
ya wack ass knew u wasnt showin, cuz that quote above is ya verse.
y u here, ya an embarrassment to this league, dont think im right?.
just look at ur name kid, see, even RV is tryna erase u off there site.
ya record had me laughin kid. i know for a fact ur the wackest clown.
u prolly heard of 3x's a charm, but dummy, its the other way around.


its past deadline...and he's prolly noshowin, so im going 6 lines.


if u show TeamOne, only go 6 lines.

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wtf, i just dropped my verse..............
w/e delete this post

now i gotta drop again...

there's one thing that owns me. period. here's why you aint dope
'cause punc you aint it... so you gotta beat me usin quotes
envy wackness? then u sayin this cant be laughter?
well its kinda hard not to snicker at candy rappers
so I might kid...mess around and say you might win...
but last time i was feeling impressions...was readin wit blind kids!

there's six for ya... honestly, i had dropped earlier, but my internet had messed up right after i posed so i guess it didnt work

envy wackness? then u sayin this cant be laughter?
well its kinda hard not to snicker at candy rappers
so I might kid...mess around and say you might win...
but last time i was feeling impressions...was readin wit blind kids

THE OPNER WAS GOOD BUT WAS A FEED STILL DECENT 6 LINES GOOD ALTOGETHER

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u here, ya an embarrassment to this league, dont think im right?.
just look at ur name kid, see, even RV is tryna erase u off there site.
ya record had me laughin kid. i know for a fact ur the wackest clown.
u prolly heard of 3x's a charm, but dummy, its the other way around

THAT CLOSER WS DECENT THE OPNER WAS POOR USAGE OF THE QUOTE BUT YOU THOUGHT HE'D NO SHOW SO I UNDERSTAND
OTHER THAN THAT ITS TIED IN QUOTABLES FOR BOTH
SO BASED ON ENJOYABILITY I GOTTA SAY ROB TOOK THIS
V/ ROBKILLA

envy wackness? then u sayin this cant be laughter?
well its kinda hard not to snicker at candy rappers
vs.
y u here, ya an embarrassment to this league, dont think im right?.
just look at ur name kid, see, even RV is tryna erase u off there site.
..
close battle both had decent lines with decent wordplay and even though u had the same quotabels. the ones that weren't quotables i liked more on the side of team one
..
vote- team one

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thanks for the votes ya'll...i wish i had more time for this, i got like 3 other leagues to write for, i'll be back comin way betta...pz

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y u here, ya an embarrassment to this league, dont think im right?.
just look at ur name kid, see, even RV is tryna erase u off there site.

vs.

envy wackness? then u sayin this cant be laughter?
well its kinda hard not to snicker at candy rappers

Well even on qoutables, so A breakdown

Yung

T been losin more than i have. when textceein, ur really the worse.
ya wack ass knew u wasnt showin, cuz that quote above is ya verse.
Nah this didn't do anything...

ya record had me laughin kid. i know for a fact ur the wackest clown.
u prolly heard of 3x's a charm, but dummy, its the other way around.
Meh, nah kinda played plus to simple...

Team

there's one thing that owns me. period. here's why you aint dope
'cause punc you aint it... so you gotta beat me usin quotes
Feeding, a lil didn't hit hard anyway...

so I might kid...mess around and say you might win...
but last time i was feeling impressions...was readin wit blind kids!
Lol, it's prolly played but Its alright by me...

Well I gues TeamOne was more consistent with it, pretty weak battle should went more that six...Both can do better...but Team One go it.

Vote - TeamOne

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y u here, ya an embarrassment to this league, dont think im right?.
just look at ur name kid, see, even RV is tryna erase u off there site.

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envy wackness? then u sayin this cant be laughter?
well its kinda hard not to snicker at candy rappers

so I might kid...mess around and say you might win...
but last time i was feeling impressions...was readin wit blind kids!

vote: team one...kinna close, yung can do betta seen him come ill on PR

I thought young impression's was better. and i liked the one like where you said somethin about RV tring to delete him from the site.

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This could'a been a decent battle if it wasn't so short. I got Teamone taking this. The closer was decent nameplay. The attempted wordplay in the second couplet was a good try too.


vote - Teamone