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u spit first so go

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

ok im new to this site so my style maybe a lot different then every1 else's cuz im used to a different type of textcein but i hope it aint 2 much of a difference. So here goes:

When se7en found out he was battling me, he ate the *whole clip* to his *head* so now he’s SWEATIN BULLETS,*
u the wackest on the site but that dun mean I’m *holding back,* I’m *swinging my hardest* so u GETTING *FULL HITS*
Ur *punches r so weak*, its not cuz your *shooting blanks* its cuz your *pulling a trigger* on an *EMPTY CLIP*
when u clicked the *send button* on your *spit* it was like u *flushed the toilet* cuz u *SENT ME SHIT*
I have so many *styles* of textcein, I can son u every time, in *SIX WAYS*
When u *ejaculate* your spit, it leaves the voters *nauseous* like *sex* from *SICK GAYS*
u say your more of a battle rapper then a freestyle, what r u retarded those r both the SAME
Go ahead and work on the *mechanics* of your spit and put out a *demo* cuz u aint meeting FAME
The worse thing to happen to rap was on December 31, 19-EIGHTY EIGHT
Unlike u I dun sit on my comp, I got a life that’s y I said I MAYBE LATE
I’m ripping your *tail* off, pulling out your *fur,* it should be considered *animal cruelty* the way I’m *MURDERIN THIS CAT*
My rhymes make it *round the bases,* they *hitting homeruns* and *MY WORDS ARE IN THIS BAT*


PS
half of this battles is personals so cheCc his profile and my callout incase u get confused or sumptin.

~1~

Ayo,
Dawg, I do have a life bitch, I have a wife and a fucked up kid/
I'm battlin' one right now dawg, which one, it's your pick/(shit)
I juss made a spark, so u wouldn't get lost in the dark/
It's difficult, how 2 start, when I'm battlin' a gangsta retard/

Blue or red, still dawg, that shit juss ain't gonna help/
You going str8 to hell, after this lost, cause you gonna kill urself/
You juss wrote me a love letter, still that shit juss wasn't better/
Your gay, wack, and so dumb you'd drown in a desert/

Lyrically, wat eva your name is, will always spit lame shit/
He'd suck dick smoother, if someone told him 2 ^ his game shit/
I'll take this battle, cut your shit, so dawg juss fuck this/
And slice your neck, wit the razor I shave my nutz wit/

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uppin votes x1************************************************ ************************************************** ************************************************** ******

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

Come on people vote on this battle, don't sleep on this battle,

juss vote uppin x2, ************************************

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

flow- A-DueCe-26mad3
punches- A-DueCe-26mad3
stucture- se7en
punches- A-DueCe-26mad3
personals- A-DueCe-26mad3

vote- A-DueCe-26mad3

vote on this -

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opener-duece
punches-tie
personals-7
metas-7
multies-tie
vocab-hmmpph-tie
finisher-7

good battle but 7 takes it in my opinion. just had a better overall verse. No Hate Just a vote

Thank You
Peace

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Deuce
Cultivate your structure, those stretched bars..
Are hard to read n look immature - herbish..
As for your content, lacked solid punches & or..
Personals.. also all the other catagory's..
Wordplay etc, where hardly included.

Seven
Better structure..better punches..
More wit & creativity..
Overall, just better battle verse.
Not great, but alot better then Deuce's..

vote:Seven

Click her to vote & Return the favour...

yo
in my veiw 7 takes this with better structure
flow
pounches i think it was harder
opener
closer

vote 7

no hate jus a vote

check out my battles in sig


peace

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I vote you should too


DON'T CLICK HERE

ok so thats 1-0 se7en still uppin 4 votes. and i dun wanna seem like im complainin or nuttin but sum1 said i didnt have personals or sumptin but i did. if u read se7en's profile or w/e then ud see that i used shit from it so where do u get that i didnt use personals. But its all good i aint complainin but that just makes it seem like u didnt read my spit or sumptin but w/e i dun care. UPPIN

Deuce
nice flow..vocab was good...
punches where good .....
and so was ur personals....
ur bars where fairly strectched....
creativity etc was good coulda been better....

give u 8/10

Se7en
good stucture ur bars wherent streched..
fairly Weak punches and personals...
the elements used in a battle are lacked...
ur creativity was poor....

give u 6.5/10

nice battle lads


VOTE: DUECE

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

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Se7eN
gets my vote came wit better punches an overall a better verse....
i need u to vote on this battle, only sum1 with a 100 posts can vote. Ive already won, but cant get the win till the poll is finished......peace im out,

please........it needs to end
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101657

Deuce --
A different style, not a lot of rhymes, and that costs some points in my mind, but there were a few good punches despite the missed rhyme. Pretty clever shit.

Se7en --
pretty standard, but pretty weak. not really any good punches.

both were pretty weak, but deuce had more, so...

vote: deuce


Return the favor--

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934