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07-03-05, 03:59 PM | #1 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Cant Tell Me Freestyle..
IP: 97E0 0CED
Yeah.. freestyled.. not great but did it quick.. my voice sorta fades in and out at times because i kept moving my head wen i was freestyling lol.. but yeah.. the quality isnt so good either i guess cuz my freaken friend jacked up wen he was editing everything.. so along with other songs i recorded that day.. but yeah.. here it iz.. not so great but w/e..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/dabatos_music.htm Song in myspace http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197291 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197923
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07-03-05, 04:08 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Um.. bruh... you need 2 put your beat homie..
Lyrics.. is coo.. lol @ the beat in the background.. when this shit started playing I was like wtf.. I thought some1 connected with me to talk on aim.. Shit is coo.. but add a beat.. and um drop feedback.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197995
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07-03-05, 04:10 PM | #3 | |||||
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ive been half xpectin u 2 drop some dope ass studio track wid all tha studio talk u been givin l8r but ok lets hear u free cuz,
beat is sick, wats ur AIM, i want it....we can collab 4 a track...neayz, i cnt hear shit ur vocals r soo low..damn when u gonna spit lol......ok cool, ur vocals r still too low, ur voice is cool,its not bad, wierd ass topic 2 free bout lol, but what u sayin is cool, nuttin lyrically amzing but decent http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197837 RTF
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07-03-05, 04:17 PM | #4 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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yeah atleast its decent for a freestyle lol...
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07-03-05, 04:17 PM | #5 | |||||||
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^I didnt hear any beat
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07-03-05, 04:18 PM | #6 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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huh????????????????? add a beat??????????????
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07-03-05, 04:19 PM | #7 | |||||||
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I listened 2 it.. and I didnt hear any beat...
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07-03-05, 04:22 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Nigga.. Im listening now again.. aint no beat.. the beat is in the background.
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07-03-05, 04:25 PM | #9 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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okay? lol..........
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07-03-05, 04:32 PM | #10 | |||||||
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You start talking.. then like 1 min in the song.. you pause.. and start whispering.. and then.. you start spitting again.. Iono I hear no beat..
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07-03-05, 05:08 PM | #11 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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man thats wierd lol..but yeah the engineering sucked in this shyt.. but w/e thanx for the feed
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07-03-05, 05:39 PM | #12 | |||||||
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i can tell u this....whoever produced this song needs alot more work wit that mixxin board...y is the beat panned to the right...and u need to pronounce ya words betta...alot of words in the second verse sound muffled...
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07-03-05, 05:41 PM | #13 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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lol yeah.. nah he's really good at mixing and shyt.. but he had hella shyt in his mind i guess.. he sed he'll let me re-record for free this friday and we'll do it good next time
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07-05-05, 07:01 AM | #14 | |||
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interesting
the beat is almost elevator music-like decent track the vocals weren't blended into the beat well ur flow was aiight on it not bad 1 |
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07-05-05, 03:07 PM | #15 | ||||||
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this was aight. i was feeling the beat and the lyrics were ok. but more conviction is def needed.
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