yo mac nino is back.Sorry I ain't been on here for a long time.I am
going drop something about the war with iraq.I ain't down with
it because we should be finding bin laden not hussein.I am
going let you know how I feel about it.Here it goes.



We going to war with iraq because president bush hates saddam hussein/
If we killed innocent people we will be causing their familes full of
pain/
You know president bush going to war because his father had beef with saddam a long time ago/
If any american citizen got to go to war should be provided with
some dough/
How in theworld can you expect for a woman to take of three or four kids when her man following orders from uncle sam/
How can we beat iraq when we ain't never found bin laden in
afghanstian/
It seems that the un nation deosn't want to support us,north korea got all the supplies to turn amercia into dust/
President bush needs to fight hussein one on one,but he doesn't
have any guts/
Focusing on one enemy and their country is not the issue/
Accosuing them of have their hands on a nuclear missle/
There other countires who makes all kinds weapons that will kill your mom.dad,aunt,grandpa,uncle,grandma,and your cousins/
If president bush says we can win against iraq there will be lots
of consequences and reprocussions/

Uppin for repplies.

nice concept and topic but its a little to simple.

I done see a couple of these just today, thats good doe..people talking about some real shit. But all the rhymes are looking the same, there kinda plain and bland, you just can't get a good topic and thinks it dope..gotta put some creativness to it.

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Yo man, this seems a bit rushed, put together quick, like a keystyle, some simple rhymes and vocab, flow could of been alot better too...
I like how you stating your opinions though... not many young cats I know really do that...
I hope we don't got to war either, got's my cousin and some of my boys in the army... now they calling me too... fuck it... I'll tell'em I got asthma or something... lol...

Peace

I know I can do better for real.Thank you to alias,cardiac,andd dizzle.I appreciate it what you said.Uppin for more repplies.

good idea but political opinions should be researched for you put em out, some of the shit is ight though.

There is alot of more facts I know about the war with iraq.I didn't
think about putting it on there and stuff.I know what you talking
about jj cal.I might do another piece similar to this.Thanks again
cal.Uppin for more repplies.

Ya had a good topic,but tha flow wuz a lil lackin.Tha bars r kinda hard to follow,up ya vocab and multis w/a betta set-up and u good to go.Stay^

i liked it alot good flow