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08-17-04, 03:17 PM | #1 | ||||||
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A River
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life is like a botomless river
rolls through paths without time for truth but after after time it is recovered through primary routes goes in to the ocean, then travels thorugh the sea but finally it returns to the river and up back to its destiny the river is full of goodness, but is also corrupt it takes and destroys, goes over anything out of luck different things and races go different places but everthing goes back to familiar faces like history the worlds actions will repeat like the water going through a very familliar peak it enchants life, but when evil erupts all his buried under the river this is a freeverse btw |
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08-18-04, 06:19 PM | #2 | |||||
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it sucked
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08-18-04, 08:38 PM | #3 | |||||||
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'It Sucked' was the gayest response I've ever read. I hope no one ever responds to your pieces.
Anyway, For a freeverse it was good, it had a little flow to it, in its own. Okay topic. I liked it. Ignore assholes *like above* that can't write out an actual response.
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