not bad.

arrangment was aight...better quality drums sounds would improve the overall sound. There was a kick or bass hit at the begginin of every second bar that was mad distorted. take that out. i also would use the springy high synth sound as much. maybe just before u add a rythm change up or sumthin. speaking of which u should add a rythm change up or sumthin. but it definately had flow...keep up

pc

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