aight nigga, 10 linez ,no hate or crew, u know da rulez. check in and we start diz shyt

you spit first breezy

aight check diz shyt......


consider diz ur warnin before dizasta comez/
i slash ya gumz dont ya know ur bitchass iz done/
u wanna take my place in havoc and grim/
my shoez will explode as soon as u go to step in them/
ill mop ya ass up not leavin a trace/
with ya skin as ppale as micheal jackson'z face/
ya run and hide when u hear death knock/
itz just me waitin to greet ya with da glock/
i dig ya grave and knock ur ass in,
have a nice trip/
ill give ya two last wordz then empty da clip/

(im bout to wipe my ass witcho bib cuz you about to have shit in yo life breezy)
yo check it

yo u need ta be like a cricket and straight hop outta here,i can sense fear,i dont need a glock ill straight hitcha from da rear/ (kicked yo ass witcho own shit)
im a lyrical god and im holding the citizens death list,
its say puertoricanelly's bout ta kill cricket, he might as well slit his wrists/
you usin michael jackson as punchlines when dat shitz played out,
you might as well prewrite yo shit and make yoself believe thats what battln is all about/
your a young female and you can call me Ted Bundy (this nigg that killed alotta girls a while back)
ill kill you like he did bitches and walk about thinking its funny/
u aint battlin you writing to me cute like its a love poem,
if i asked you the name of a rapper you wouldnt knowum/

aight uppin votez on diz shyt yo. come on we need da votez peepz

yo, uppin sum votez ppl, dont sleep on diz shyt

wake up niggaz!!!!!!!!!!

i dont even need to read nelly's verse after he said the word cricket, cricket did not so much as try a personal.

please return the favor me versus MichaelCorleone

come on pplz, ya'll sleepin. dont colze yo eyez on diz shyt. uupin #2, come on we need sum votez, we go to uppin #3 then im closin diz shyt

i'll cast my vote on your battle once i get 100 posts. But as for right now i'll say that nelly won. nelly had better punches though they were quite bad themselves. cricket just never really had anything to offer except the played mj quote. both need more battles but nelly was just a lil bit more agressive

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

vote on these for me

horrible battle!! cricket u'r flow sucked, structure was ok, disses were horrible, no good punches at all. puerto u'r structure was ok, flow was ok, explanation at the end of the lines made it all fucked up though so don't do that with the (this shit), u'r disses were aight, atleast u tried to throw some punches. Vote-puerto

For obviosu reasons stated above, he had more punches, and better flow. but both needa elevate still.

puerto rican dude wins cuz cricket bit....


my shoez will explode as soon as u go to step in them/


eminem said that in that obie trice joint..forgot what its called..
wait...its "One day to Live"..i think...biters are gay

nelly 1
other guy bit
and the michael jackson line is played
both r played

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Nelly won hands down. He had better punches, flow, and structure. Both need to elevate heavily.

BTW, biters are gay!!! *crickets start chirping* Especially when they quote fillers.

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