I'm sorry for this being a third post on the front page, but I needed to get this out and JT couldnt access the internet at the time and we wanted to get this collab up. I'm sorry once again.
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OUR LOVE

Dthsmissingangel
The gift of love is something in which you have given me…
I have never felt so free and real…
You were there through thick and thin and you still are…

SmoothJT
I have never felt like this to any other person before…
You make me happy and keep me in line…
I will always be by your side…

Dthsmissingangel
You make me happy and treat me like I’m something…
You hurt me, but through everything you were still there…
You were there when I needed someone and learned to keep your distance when I gave clues unlike avoiding them…

SmoothJT
When I hurt you I thought that was that but we stayed close…
I wanted to leave when I hurt you but I stayed and I stayed distant but close…
My love for you goes deep…
Deeper than any ocean, higher than any mountain…

Dthsmissingangel
My love for you was hidden by hate, but I realized I still do...
I still remember everything, good times and bad…
Secrets and words, hidden thoughts and told ones…
I remember it all and cherish it still…

SmoothJT
I thought deep and long and what was hidden returned…
My love for you grew and I kept it til the time was right…
When I look at you I see an angel and no other word describes you but priceless, priceless to me…

Dthsmissingangel
I look deep into your eyes and see love…
Whether it is true or not I do not know…
You stare at me when I sleep or lay down even tho it drives me crazy…

SmoothJT
I messed up in the past but now my life is better and my feelings for you are no lie…
When I’m apart from you I’m depressed and when I see your face it brings me joy…
I stare to see what’s inside, what’s so true…

Dthsmissingangel
We all mess up…
I definitely did and now I’m paying for it, but I have you by my side comforting me thro it all…
I wait to see what happens, but I feel no matter what does, you will still be here and so will I…

SmoothJT
I stand tall and strong by your side our love together can overcome the bad…
As our souls as one be happy once again…
I fell in love with you for you…
Your personality fits mine almost perfect…

Dthsmissingangel
Our personalities fit and racing brings them together, but mistakes prevent that now…
Too weak to lift myself up, but you are there holding me every step of the way…
You hold me up as we walk down the road to something we’ll discover together…

SmoothJT
You are on a journey and I’m by your side all the way…
Every step every moment I am your strength, to keep you up…
All I ask you is to keep your head high as we travel…
Sleep when you can because you need your strength…

Dthsmissingangel
It never comes easy but I try…
I try and keep my strength and keep my head on as well…
What I can’t do by myself you help me thro…
For that I am forever in your debt and will love you always whether I am here or not, if not in body, in spirit…

SmoothJT
Forever is our love in any form…
I’ll do what’s in my power to help you…
Til death do we part…
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I see the beauty inside and out…
It’s so true that I just want to hold you forever…

Dthsmissingangel
Together forever and waiting for that one day…
Feelings are no longer hidden…
Staying together, if not lovers then best friends…
And it will remain true until the end of time and eternity…

SmoothJT, and Dthsmissingangel
Forever together, I Love You Devilish Princess
Forever together, I Love You Speed Demon

Duet epitimizes the word "collaboration". This was sheer beauty... and some how it reminds me of me and my gf. The shared feeling of love was shown perfectly. I enjoyed this abit 2 much

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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds'
nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol

none yall niggas wanna see me...

I like it its very nice , lots of love i know how it feels keep it up
I like reading them.

Why did you never collab with me JT? yeah, you guys really made me feel for the both of you, that there was a work of beauty, and a work of art, despoiled by the cruelty and selfishness of the modern world...LMAO...seriously though..it was a great piece, and i could sense that there was more to the poem than the lines it contained, this piece had me reading between the lines..and what i found was amazing....

Thanks all, especially you liba. I'm glad you all liked it. Now all i gotta do is get JT to get on here and respond to yall too. We appreciate the feed that comes our way. Its nice that we get that instead of criticism, even tho criticism doesnt seem to affect us that much but it is taken to heart. Thanks again for the feed it is much appreciated and we hope to get some more. Keep it comin. Much luv.

critisism is meerly a way to bring out the best in you, i understand the feeling you possess when someone tells you your not good enough, you feel like you have been wronged right?

how can you succeed? when everyone expects you to fail?

but somehow, you comeback even stronger, even better than you were before, because you have the burning ambition to prove that person, or people, wrong...and you did. Well done..JT and you both should be proud, this is a real achievement, i am grateful that you value my opinion.

respect...

This a great piece like everyone said, true emotion. I really liked this, You both did a really good job at showin your emotions. keep it up and drop some more, Would really like to see more from the both of you

peace

Exactly Liba, we come back stronger. Thx Krem for the feed. We have been droppin for a long time, but we havent been on rb lately. Thx for the feed again. It is taken to heart and much appreciated.

Can i just ask..are you and JT together?

This was a nice collabo

some very intelligant thoughts...very well writtin....you both worked wel ltogether on this...the story line was good rhyme scheme and structure was decent...well done....keep it up

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Liba, u may say we are and we arent. We have a lot of things to work out and I have a problem that he is helping me through at the moment, so I can't really "be" with him at the moment. Poetry seems to keep us together, and we're closer than ever now.

Rule, Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot, especially coming from you. You have great pieces and its taken to heart as well.

JT and I are pleased that you all seem to like this collabo. We are recieving a good amount of feedback on this, and it is greatly appreciated to the both of us. We were writing this together, things came straight from our hearts. That is the meaning of this collab, true feelings. Thanks again for the feedback. Much luv from JT and I.

From the bottom of my heart I repsect all of you for givin feed back on this to us. I know i haven't been on for a while but i'm commin back and strong. Liba thank you so much for being a good friend and I value what you have to say a lot. I really appreciate it that all of you take time to give your opinion. Thank all of you once again, JT

Friends are there to help friends out right? JT you know i'm always here for you and i hope that you and DthsMissingAngel have a wonderful relationship, whatever happens between you, stay strong, and keep ya headz up, the both of ya..i have a lot of patter..LMAO but anywayz....

respect..