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02-02-04, 12:14 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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2 tracks. Please peep, critique
IP: D154 1BD3
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ijllyricmusic.htm
PLease say which one your critiquing. Both would be dope.  Both a collab with me and UnderRated |
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02-02-04, 12:39 AM
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IP: 2C1F 94C9
* Listening *....Beat Is Ehhh...Ok...first guy Flow Is Not That Great..Its Like U Tried 2 Hard...But U Catch Up During The End....U Need More Emotion Man..U Dont Seem Hyped Up...Voice is So-So...Second Guy....Ya'll Sound Alike...4 Real...First Guy Flowed A Little Bit Better...Quality Isn't That Great....Beat Really Don't Fit This Topic...
Overall...I Give This Track a 7/10...Props Homie...Stay Up... And If U Could..Check Out My New Song 47 Popstars.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395 Feedback..Much Appreciated...Thanx One Luv Ya'll... ~KJ~
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02-02-04, 12:49 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
^which one did ya peep?^ thanks for lookin at it man, appreciate it
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02-02-04, 12:51 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 2C1F 94C9
Struggles...i think that was the name....
yea...pretty coo man... check minez out... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395 One Luv... ~KJ~
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02-02-04, 01:27 AM
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IP: 66D6 F47A
listenin to struggles... quality is real bad..flow was tight. lyrics were sick, lyrics were koo.. but if u upped ur quality, this shit will be more ill than it is... nice shit man..
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02-02-04, 07:15 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
thanks..workin on the audio quality...uppin
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02-02-04, 04:17 PM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
feedback?
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02-02-04, 10:45 PM
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New to RB
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IP: FBA1 C2F8
peeping struggles
dont like this beat...tooo bland qaulity bunz, flow is good, sometimes too fast so i cant hear what you saying delivery feel at the end of ya verse, you get boring second dude, mumbles too much...i gotta strain to hear what he saying overall, i aint feel this, but yalls flow is good, just need some emotion, pronounciation and qaulity help... pz |
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02-04-04, 02:05 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
thanks, up....I know the sound quality isn't the greatest, I'm to broke to buy a good mic
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02-04-04, 06:48 PM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
come on guys
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02-05-04, 12:59 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
feedback?
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02-05-04, 03:43 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
please?
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02-09-04, 11:16 PM
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Guest
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IP: 7733 7AF9
listened to underrated diss track.
i dont know man. flow seemed extremely basic....same thing over and over....emotionless......shit didnt connect cleverly...had some basic multis in there. seriously work on the delivery of your rapping. i dunno. wasnt really feeling it. |
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02-09-04, 11:19 PM
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IP: 7733 7AF9
just listened to struggles.
lyric your whole verse about "the struggles in your life" is about RB... seriously work on the DELIVERY. ahhhh |
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02-10-04, 01:16 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 9FAE 49F8
the underrated diss
well the beat is pretty good and you got a good flow that goes with it but your missing the emotions, the tone isn't there, i can't feel you on that one men.....sometimes your russing too much and losing the flow..........got some nice rimes at places but others are poorly though about......anyways keep up and don't give up men...... PIC peace |
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