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09-20-04, 01:47 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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Todays Man...
IP: 32D9 0BD3
Was jus thinkin n shit so...wrote up a lil sumthin n recorded it,i think it came out pritty good...as usual it coulda ben produced better but the lyrics an't clippin as much here
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm "todays man"
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09-20-04, 01:56 PM | #2 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 82C1 61FE
I don't like it.
The hook was Garbage. Your flow is horrible. Too choppy. Topic wise an lyrical wise good. Now u just have to transform the text to audio. Work on your flow and voice. Seem like ur tryin too hard. -1 |
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