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12-31-03, 10:03 AM
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[N.C] Kamakazi
IP: A04B E7DD
Last piece of 2003...just want to thank everyone who helped me elevate, IMO i'm still a long way of the mark of puttin' out good open mics, but thanks for everyone who's helped me take another step further...:
[Johnny 6-feet: Doorway Of Time Penskills: Passing The Mic..To Me The Deception: Deception As A Weapon] ------------------------------------------------------------- (It's short) A Soldier Of Humanitarion Decline... A Life Gettin' Ready To Resign... A Soldier Of Humanitarion Decline... A Kamakazi Influenced By Emperor's Malign... Dying For My Country Family Left Behind... Can't Find A Positive Thought Within My Mind... Wife, 2 Kids Brainwashed By The Evil Of Mankind... Tried To Remain Refined But Drove To Insanity... Decaying Mentality Ready To Step Further From Sanity... Patriotic Suicide The Result Of "Breakdown Humanity"... Concentration Intact As I Countdown To Impact... Those American Muthfuckers Can't Run - Their Trapped... 15 Seconds To Collision Ready To Make a - Destruction Incision As I Aim My Target With Precision... An Accurate Strike, 5 Seconds n' I Can End "My Fight"... I Can See Innocent Faces - I Can See The Light... A Soldier Of Humanitarion Decline... A Life Gettin' Ready To Resign... A Soldier Of Humanitarion Decline... A Kamakazi Influenced By Emperor's Malign... |
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12-31-03, 10:20 AM
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IP: 791F 8353
I liked this shit cause it was type deep plus u displayin feelingz lik u goin 2 war & shit
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12-31-03, 12:03 PM
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IP: 3BB7 F727
tru this shit was tight, liked the flow in this and the heart was in it, i dont know how i feel about tha lyrics, being an american my self, but also irish to tha fullest. but good shit.
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01-01-04, 08:59 AM
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IP: CEA5 B505
uppin'
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01-01-04, 11:38 AM
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IP: CE0C B4D7
this was a good short piece, i liked all aspects of it. Very clear on what you had to say showed good base of a start to something really good keep it up man that was a very good verse
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01-02-04, 10:36 AM
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IP: EA47 7F42
uppin'
ty Rule n' DVUS n' D-chillz |
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01-02-04, 11:20 AM
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IP: C1DA C961
This Piece wuz Deep Nice Shit................You got me into it.....................Keep em coming Homeboy..
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01-03-04, 11:34 AM
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IP: F229 1E93
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01-04-04, 07:33 PM
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IP: 88A8 93C1
not bad
but not the level of writing i'd expect from you flow seemed kind of forced in a way.. and there wasnt much impact or imagery developed from the piece seemed to be lacking in creativity or sumthing sorry just dont feel u excelled urself here |
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