10 lines
3 votes KO
5 votes win
due 15 minutes after check in...
Drop tontie please...
No crewing,dicking,hating,biting,feeding,swaying,recy cling

My verse will be there

Peaceful

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Spittin my rymes and im on a roll, I got this weak mc’s oh so fearful
But When im takin my time and im on your girl I leavin da bitch oh so cheerful
Cus when your on line tryin ta spit at this
Im back at her house working da clitouris
that’s good keep on it cus u need practice, but the fact is
imma bring your girl back to my house. Aka the pussy palace
3 door dingo’n dat shit till her clits a callous
so just keep at it till u can finally compare to my talents
I know u don’t want anymore when im at the top of my gaaaaaame
So imma go back over to your girls, and trust me she goin be glad I caaaaame

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Picture nobody wants no noise-from-you, hitcha with so many 'points-of-view', coroners are confused on the hole to feed poison-through/
steppin-to-me-son? guarentee'd heaven-would-greetcha, this is more of a 'mis-match' than red-an-christina!/
you happen-ta-be, outta-ya-league, battlin'-me, habits-to-key, baddest-disease, status-decrease, an catchin-a-leaf!/(mmhmmm)
let the futile-commence, this pupil-will-end, in a brutal-event, cause Pic you-dont-contend, all my shit is 'fat an tight' like sumos-when-tense/
zero-comparison, he-rose-in-arrogance, we-don't-care-a-bit, cause hes gonna be-sold-asparagus/(L...get it?)
you're not phasin-this-rival, i hated-to-fight-you, cause you've only 'up staged ya elders' during a play-as-a-child!/

Uppin

upppinnnn......................................... .................................................. ...

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i don't got 100 posts for the poll vote, but i'll share my opinion...

punches- goes tah neek, i don't believe i saw any in pic perfects verse... neek had some nice punches
multis- obviously neek, but bro like 80% of ur multis were forced... multis are important, but when u stick them in just to have the extra multis and they don't have any purpose.."you happen-ta-be, outta-ya-league, battlin'-me, habits-to-key, baddest-disease, status-decrease, an catchin-a-leaf"... the flow was nice here and line at least made sense up to the habits tah key...but after that it was obvious ur forcing multis... keep ur multis managable, when u force em so much it takes away from ur verse instead of adds to it...but at least u use multis, bout 80% of the cats here don't...
wordplay-no one had any good examples of it
flow-neek...that string of multis took it
personals- none...

overall neek just out classed pic in every aspect....

vote=neek

Yo, here's my insights...

First, no hate to either of you. picture... ur verse was way too plain, wasn't feelin it at all. u kept talking about his girls pussy and thats it. step it up elevate more. be more creative. better punches. Neek, you had this one. still need to elevate some. was feeling some of your verse. alright punches.

vote- Neek (HIT MY BATTLE UP)^
Honest Vote, please. Getting slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...66&page=2&pp=15

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its dumb ta be coverin alot of different things in a ten line spit, stayin on one topic means the ending adds to the lead. and word play cant chu read "Spittin my rymes and im on a *roll*, I got this weak mc’s oh so *fearful*
But When im takin my time and im on your *girl* I leavin da bitch oh so *cheerful*
need ta have a longer battle and i'll cover more... ya'll ignorate and cant vote anyway sso go back to give your bf's bj's

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pic i dosnt matter ur a week ass bitch

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imma break you tomorrow youngin...............................

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Yo if i could vote it would be for neek he had much hard punchlines then picture..not hating on any one..but thats my opinion
ne wayz vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934

Uppin some real votes....

Yo, I can vote now dipshit... don't be upset cause ur verse sucked and u lost. aiight?
My votes going up. My explaination is above some posts^^^

Neek or anyone else..check my battle out... honest vote it though.. I just need it over with
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266

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Upped....