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06-21-05, 08:25 PM | #1 | |||
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TumbleWeed
IP: 0086 7B47
She sat at night and wrote a sweet small poem. Of love and life and firelight. Places that she roamed. Then she took a small ribbon, tied each love poem tight. Placed them on a tumbleweed, let it drift into the night. MIles away the tumbleweed stopped, snagged up in some brush. A lone riding cowboy found it. The things he read melted his heart. She writes her poems everynight. Cowboy always looks at the tumbleweeds. She not knowing he finds them. He, longing to find the woman who writes them. Love dancing in the desert breeze. travels with the tumbleweeds............. |
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06-22-05, 08:47 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 0825 899A
It's so refreshing to read your poetry, because there's never a bad thing to say about them. You bring excellent emotion and tell vivid stories....this piece was a 10/10
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06-22-05, 04:35 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 0086 7B47
thanks man, uppin for more.
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06-22-05, 10:59 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 4500 6328
I like that, it gives you the vivid image of a love story you want to see happen. Maybe you should do a part 2 where he gets closer to finding his mystery poet. I'd like to see thier story play out.
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06-23-05, 06:19 AM | #5 | |||
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ok, thanks ..
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