Diz Just A Quick Keystyle Took Me 8 Minutes Ta Type Up Fo' Cha'll, Da Structuring Of Da Barz Haz Improved After I Got Sum Help, Dont U Think?


Theres Bitch Niggaz, Theres Rich Niggaz, They All My Niggaz
Therez Ho Niggas, Therez Yo Niggas, But Ya Still My Niggaz
Pull Back Triggaz, Roll In Figgaz, Ahm Street 2 Da Core
My Blood Runs Cold, Hood Life Is In Me Lyke Tupac Shakur
Get Da Fuck On Da Floor, Drop Down An Gimme Twenty-Four
Itz Lyke I Sport Black n White Stripez Witta Whistle, Cause I Settle Da Score
I'll Give You An Encore, Scream Til Ya Sore, Nah I Aint Da Infamous Hova
Molded InTo A Toy Soldier, So U Fuckin Wit Me n Yo Lifez OVER
Ride A Hard Top Nova, Wit Some Tens, Dont Hate, They Stay CLEAN
I'm Posted Up In Da Projects, Fuck Mic-Checks, Nah Mean
My Flowz In Cash, I Bring It For Ya Ass, Like No OTHER
I Done Told U, Ya All My Niggaz, U CAN HATE, But U Still Mah BROTHER
Just From A Diffrent Mother, Yupp, My Raps Are Somewhat Of A Novelty
Get At Talib Kweli, Not Even He Can Touch On My QUALITY
Follow-Me, Get Ya Dusty Boots, Wipe em off an Talk a WALK
So When Theory Bringz Beef, You Gon Need Mo Than Your FORK
I Talk the Talk, Bring It Live As Sticky Fingerz
Dont Nobody Wanna Hear Yo Vocalz, Like UnSigned R&B Singerz
Attack Formation, Move In Both Flanks, I'm The Highest Rank
From General Too The Chief, Fuck Whipz, I Roll In Tankz
Shankz n Gatz, Gank Ya Witta Bat, Take All Yo Riches
Itz Lyrical Khaos Causin A Fuss, But Now Ahm Done Wit'chu BITCHEZ

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Can I Get A Little Feedback Plz?

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yo dis rhyme was aiite. Yeh da structure was pretty good. Flow was ok.....................
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Lol.I ain't sure you should be gettin at niggas like Talib Kweli. Hes one of dem real respected ones.

But overall this iz a nice piece.

I'm out

Theres Bitch Niggaz, Theres Rich Niggaz, They All My Niggaz
Therez Ho Niggas, Therez Yo Niggas, But Ya Still My Niggaz


that pretty much summed it up for me, had to stop reading after that...enough of the nigga crap.....

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yeah i liked it, jus the niggaz bit was a bit unnecessary but overall it was kool, u had sum great lines.
Pull Back Triggaz, Roll In Figgaz, Ahm Street 2 Da Core
My Blood Runs Cold, Hood Life Is In Me Lyke Tupac Shakur
^^i liked this 1 lol

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

Ay Thanx Fo The Feed, I Only Used Niggaz Like Dat 'Cause I'm Holdin It Down 4 The Family

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Hey I Forgot About Diz, Hit Me Back Niggaz

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This Was Tight It Flowed But A Few Multi's And Vocab It Would've Been Off The Hook For Real Yo But Keep On Dropping This