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03-23-06, 06:18 PM | #1 | ||||
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Jae Stackz feat. Lindsie - A Second Chance
IP: 3C0A 88CA
Verse 1: Jae Stackz
Hook: Lindsie Verse 2: Jae Stackz Hook: Lindsie Outro: Lindsie Left Feed On: Leady - Gay Bashin Ecko - On The Block
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03-24-06, 01:13 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: F74A 5C03
hmmm...after the diss track ill sit back n give some good honest feed....
ha love this beat....the beine song stays on my playlists....okay its still the lisp thing...it takes a lil bit away from the delivery, but adds to the emotion.... you kept the lyrics deep on the track....i like that...nothing bad...i respect the q line...it shows you dont hold a grudge thats honerable....few people can do that.....the girl sounds nice, but i hear the noise redux or an echo too much....sounds very robotic....but shes a good singer...overall...good track...better then some of the stuff ive heard from you....your showing progress....i have no complaints bout the lyrics...pretty good song...work on the girls part with the echoey sound...n yep...keep it up man...
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03-24-06, 10:42 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: D3CA A17D
another great track...good flow good delievery good lyrics...the girl on the track adds a great touch to it....8.5/10
i'm done with my verses on our collab i'll send you the beat over aim just holla at me |
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03-24-06, 02:48 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: B78D 2847
Thanks yall........
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03-24-06, 05:16 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 293A 57AB
uppin............
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03-25-06, 09:50 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 5385 E5FA
Ite listenin.......Nice beat....ite 1st verse is nice...good flow.....dope lyrics.....good emotion and delivery aswell.......Hook is nice the gurl gives a good vibe to the song......second verse again is dope....you really developed a unique style on tha mic it's nice....Again hook is dope......Overall 9.0/10
Good track mayne....keep up. |
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03-25-06, 09:51 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 70AD 2AD4
I apreciate dat nigguh....
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03-25-06, 10:31 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: 64CA 6C26
yea...I flowed to this beat before...good
beat is loud though...can barely hear your intro ad libs hmm @ Q line...we already discussed that so yea Your flow fits this beat well...good lyrics mainly because they're personal the singing sounds nice, but was a tad off beat, IMO Good drop 1 |
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03-25-06, 11:28 AM | #9 | ||||
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IP: F429 CDC7
Thanks and yeah I wrote this a while ago..we koo now fam
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03-25-06, 01:36 PM | #10 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: B073 2C91
Aigh
Flows koo on verses,ridin beat well beats dope deliverys koo emotions fits track well hook lets the emotion part down a lil,sounds monotone but its koo add on koo track lyrics were nice,fit the beat well overall:8/10
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03-25-06, 01:38 PM | #11 | |||||
ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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i like the feel of this joint, that word fam....the hook is hot too, ya lyrics is nice
good drop homeboi |
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03-25-06, 01:41 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: B35C F0CF
Thanks...fam...1
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03-27-06, 09:30 AM | #13 | |||||||
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listening:
Ive always love this beat. The beginning is oo loud bro...But when you kick in very very good...u've improved alot since i last listened to you bro....ur flow and lyrics are great...presence is dope and emotion is there! im not feeling the mixing on the girl singing, its ashame cuz she has a nice voice but that the only bad point! good track bro! |
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03-27-06, 11:39 AM | #14 | ||||
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Thanks fam..............
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