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Lyric_RevelatioN | 0 | 0% | |
sabotage | 5 | 100.00% | |
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11-05-04, 11:20 PM | #1 |
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sabotage vs Lyric_RevelatioN
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11-05-04, 11:30 PM | #2 | |
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Lyric_RevelatioN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 11:30 PM.
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11-05-04, 11:51 PM | #3 | |
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sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 11:51 PM.
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11-05-04, 11:52 PM | #4 |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
ok here it go
yo you new to this site so you cant be too hard the only time u pop slugs is walkin through wet grass in the dark read the 'lyrics', this 'revelation' im killin stomp on his head and leave more prints than a north carolina fitted i know you think that u sik, but this nigga is spiteful your 'lyrics' cant be too dope ur second name comes from the bible he dont really wanna battle, he gay he jus wanna sex talk im gettin votes when they see punches hittin the screen like fight night on xbox man this aint no revelation, my lyrics u cant handle break his arms and limbs, leave him with four casts(forecasts) like the weather channel im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained ok u know u going to lose so jus sit there and pout u wanna hit pussy? sure, knock urself out i hope thats enough |
11-05-04, 11:59 PM | #5 |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
where u at?..........................................
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11-06-04, 12:00 AM | #6 |
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IP: 8F97 997B
after throwin this shit down i know youll want more///
ill pull an eminem and give you a fuckin encore/// ill leave u down bloodied beaten and battered/// from hearin my punches ur prolli sittin there sayin oh my reputation is shattered/// this is my first battle here and you mite be able to tell/// it doesnt matter tho realli cuz ill still rip him well/// you belong at the bottom my shit is first-rate/// your girl tell u she pulled a paris hilton and me and her...we made a sex-tape/// so skip all your bullshit throw down some shit that is hot/// so you dont gotta be embarrassed by a kid on his first drop/// |
11-06-04, 12:03 AM | #7 |
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IP: 8F97 997B
shit you prolli killed me i couldnt think i was runnin outta time....hot shit nice verse
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11-06-04, 12:09 AM | #8 |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: sabotage
i gotta go wit sabotage......both had good punches...but thats the only thing that revelation had......sab had better wordplay(liked the[dope,bible]and the[fourcast,forecast]), and better flow....revelation shouldve came alot harder....i can tell that he'll be good ...just keep elevating kid.....my vote goes to sabotage |
11-06-04, 12:20 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
Voted For: sabotage
aight... this was an....ok at best battle... nothing spectacular... have seen better from sabatoge but he still gets the win and here is why... sabatoge-good flow, ok punches and personals, decent wordplay, lacking a little in creativity...michael jackson lines are kinda played but still funny any way... structure was way off, overall imma give your verse 6/10 Lyric- flow was aight, weak punches and personals, structure was wack (the use of /// to indicate the end of a line is very newbish) creativity was aight... neither of ya had a multi... over all lyric no hate but ya gotta elevate a lil. 4/10 overall this battle was kinda wack... looks rushed... not a fan of rushed battles... but any way the winner is sabatoge with a better all around battle verse.... no hate to either MC cause ya both came out and all that so props to both of yall for that... keep elevatin and stay up both of you....~1~ VOTE- SABATOGE |
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11-06-04, 12:21 AM | #10 | ||
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IP: 3971 6458
Voted For: sabotage
yo you new to this site so you cant be too hard the only time u pop slugs is walkin through wet grass in the dark ^^^^na, weak intro. dont like it read the 'lyrics', this 'revelation' im killin stomp on his head and leave more prints than a north carolina fitted ^^^^dont get it, and flow was really WACK im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained ^^^^ideas were there, but it needed better execution! ok u know u going to lose so jus sit there and pout u wanna hit pussy? sure, knock urself out ^^^^LOL now that was a better line, good closer after throwin this shit down i know youll want more/// ill pull an eminem and give you a fuckin encore/// ^^^^mmm, average intro, good wordplay ill leave u down bloodied beaten and battered/// from hearin my punches ur prolli sittin there sayin oh my reputation is shattered/// ^^^^FLOW WAS WACK, na weak punch you belong at the bottom my shit is first-rate/// your girl tell u she pulled a paris hilton and me and her...we made a sex-tape/// ^^^^haha DRY, very weak punch, no meaning to it so skip all your bullshit throw down some shit that is hot/// so you dont gotta be embarrassed by a kid on his first drop/// ^^^^mmmm, pretty weak closer, you need to work on your flow and you punches are really quit dry, no hate vote goes to sabotage. punches were a bit wack, but that last one, HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA ONG ROFLMAO!!! veryy good! return the favour ok!
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11-06-04, 12:25 AM | #11 |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
yeah yeah uppin for more...........................
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11-06-04, 01:50 AM | #12 |
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IP: 2C34 1356
Voted For: sabotage
ay nice with the *im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained* nice one |
11-06-04, 03:21 AM | #13 |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin 4 1 more vote...................................
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11-06-04, 10:50 AM | #14 |
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IP: 8F97 997B
Voted For: sabotage
my vote goes to lyric-revoloution because his floe was sick and he had ok punchlines and sabotage ....your rhymes anint make sense |
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